Ophelia, I don't think putting Ken back in with his not-so-loving siblings would've been the best idea. It's better to leave him with his new family. He was willingly handed over to Krane and company.
Oh SHEEt backstory time
Did Ken evolve? Is he secretly a Zorua? These secrets are killing me, I MUST KNOW
Daisy continues to be best bird mom. She's the only one who can say the comfort things good, she can do it!
hopefully the secrets will be revealed in time! but oh I can say for sure though that Ken is an Eevee and Im not following the game rules for pokemon breeding :'D im treating it more like when 2 pokemon breed the offspring can be any species sorta thing, but aaa im glad you like daisy! shes good bird mum thank you <33
You keep doing what you're doing, I'm struggling just to write my damn 'locke. I've got too many stories to tell, somebody help me I'm dying.
As for yours, there are character dynamics and connections everywhere and I love it. I can't wait to see how it all comes together.
cries i know that feeling of 1000 stories and ideas attacking u but I believe in you!!
and omg thank you so much! I'm really glad since I honestly did try to throw connections between characters all over this comic and my hope is that id doesnt come across as too confusing in the end :'D but thank you!
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH SNAP, OH SNIPPITY SNAP. I did not expect a plot twist like this. Does that last panel mean Ken is actually a Zorua?
(and does Ophelia's knowledge about his family mean they are related?)
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PAGE!
First of all, HOOOOOGGHGHH THAT PANEL OF OPHELIA ABOUT TO ATTACK LITERALLY MADE MY HEART LEAP INTO MY THROAT. LIKE I ACTUALLY GASPED OUT LOUD. I got so scared this scene was building up to a death o o f
To the page, I absolutely love the expressions and body language, especially on Ophelia. I adore the sequence of her deciding not to attack, the way she clenches her teeth and tenses up makes me feel the pain and regret she's feeling and I love that.
The transition to the flashback/backstory (?) at the end is so creative too, I absolutely adore the color schemes you make and how well they fit the tone and situation of each scene. I'm excited for more Gladion and potential backstory but also mmmm I am not ready... please be kind to my children....
The art improvement in this comic makes me wEEP its so so so good and it continues to get better and better! Amazing page, I'm looking forward to the next one!