MM - 'Wiggle Wisaal' page 1

Now, this is the first page of my manga comic. Please note: I barely read mangas and I'm trying my best to use a manga-like style.

And don't laugh about my story! I know, she is rather childish, but I've thought long enough about it.

Please tell me, if there are any embarassing mistakes I did in my text!

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