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meteoroids and bolides are like yearling-school stuff for pegasi

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:icontigrospottystripes:
TigroSpottystripes Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2018
Meteors don't explode? Tell that to Tunguska and Chelyabinsk...
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2018
twilight doesn't know as much about the sky as she likes to think, although in her (and my) defense, most meteors do just burn up instead of violently blowing apart.
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2015
Clock later. Shiny sky rocks now.
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:iconcoolstriker64:
Coolstriker64 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015
No! NO Twi/Dash shipping in this comic!
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015
it's just the magic of friendship, bro.
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
Raven: Well, it does make sense she'd know meteors. When you're working in the skies, you gotta know that sort of stuff.
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:iconunderwoodart:
UnderwoodART Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014   Digital Artist
Rarity likes to watch...
*cracks self up*
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:iconanthrooptimist:
AnthroOptimist Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
This is a beautiful piece so far. I really hope you will be able to finish it one day. The artwork is great, the story sounds interesting... and it makes me smile... That's what the cartoon used to do. It did made you laugh, but most importantly... it made you smile.

If you'd ever publish this as a book, I'd may be willing to buy it... if I could afford it.
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:iconjetjk3:
JETJK3 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
The Artwork on this is just speechless, I'm in a total utter loss of words.
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:iconsomekindahatebreeder:
somekindahatebreeder Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist
lol they're so close :3
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:icon1992andbeyond:
1992andbeyond Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE MAN!! I WISH I KNEW HOW TO FAV THIS!!!!!!!!

I actually had a fit finding this, and poof, I find it by mistake
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:iconyupasama:
Yupasama Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
I would like to thank you to have written Rainbow Dash like still being playful but having knowledge in her own domain and not having contempt for the intellectual passion of Twilight.

The trope of the "friends hate to learn thing and make a joke of the bookish girl" is saddening. MLP was great to have subvert that (for example in the episode with daring-doo, where ALL the friends of Rainbow dash are laughing immediately when she says books are uncool). In a time where so many are anti-intellectual, it's very welcome.
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:iconthetoastmancometh:
TheToastManCometh Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Interface Designer
She told you about clocks, Twilght. She told you, bro. She warned you, dog.
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:iconsomekindahatebreeder:
somekindahatebreeder Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist
I'm subscribed!
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:iconenmar123:
Enmar123 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Adorablz!
:D
alo one broke!!!
o-o
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:iconponyvillefc11:
PonyvilleFC11 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2015
I know which one your talking about. It's the path of the broken off pieces that I don't like.
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
a couple have done that already--that's just something big meteors do sometimes
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:iconk4nk4n:
K4nK4n Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Rarity's side face and Twilight looking up... SO ADORABLE! Thank you for making this comic.
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:iconnumbersevin:
NumberSevin Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Do I sense some twidash? Or just normal friendship?
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
friendship is magic
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:iconnumbersevin:
NumberSevin Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yes, and so is the thu'um in skyrim.
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:iconcirdec:
Cirdec Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
I don't think that's normal behavior for a meteor.


(or maybe it is, hell I don't know :icontrixieshrugplz:)
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:iconjrakob:
Jrakob Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your style is something I think I like.
Things I think you will like to note about what I notice about your style.
Big eyes, just slightly bigger than in the show. Also I think you draw your ears a bit larger too but it fits with the large eyes in my opinion.
Vary nice shading, seems natural and not lazy like you see in the show. Though I don't think the shows animators are lazy I think that it's just quicker to produce episodes when you don't have to do all that crazy shading.
Thin outlines, I like that you give them those thin outlines, it makes the characters feel more sharp.

One thing though. Is that cloudsdale peaking out of the right side of te large panel?
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
noooooo it's canterlot still
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:iconemperordaniel:
Emperordaniel Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Sweet applesauce, is Twilight actually breaking off a piece of the meteor for study while it's still in flight? That's pretty awesome. :icontwilighthappyplz:
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:iconyaluckyboy09:
yaluckyboy09 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Rainbow Dash knows about Astrology

Seems Legit
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
more meteorology than astrology
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:iconyaluckyboy09:
yaluckyboy09 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Touché
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:iconchrisgamer:
Chrisgamer Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Holy shit, he's working faster than never...finally ^^
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
was I just insulted
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:iconkingofraggedy:
kingofraggedy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Just take a look at his profile pic. :P

:iconpinkiepieproblemplz:
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
I'm not mad I'm just wondering


I know I'm slow
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:iconkingofraggedy:
kingofraggedy Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Well, nonetheless, you've done so much with this comic already, and I think you're really skilled. I didn't mean to say anything harmful, and if I did, I'm sorry.
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
nah, you didn't. if anyone did, it was 'chrisgamer' and I'm not even sure if he did yet
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:iconchrisgamer:
Chrisgamer Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
And I really need to chage my profile pic... /)_-
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:iconchrisgamer:
Chrisgamer Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Oh no no no no no, of course not! Sorry if I offended you pal... ^^'
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Nah I wasn't offended, I was just wondering if you wanted me to be :Þ

no hard feelings man
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Sire-Sword Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Those meteors are so pweety...
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:iconanzul:
anzul Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
holy crap! twilight is sumoning a meteor! or maybe it decided to come over and say hi XD

gotta say, the last 3 pages depicted a cute and nice moment, very frienshid-alike :D
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:icontridgeon:
Tridgeon Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yessss does this mean that the next segment is starting soon?!?!
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:icontswt:
TSWT Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
hahah, yeah, pretty soon!
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:iconmildirk:
mildirk Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
that must be a piece of rock veering off. hmm...
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:iconthe-bloody-bishop:
The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
Because you never know when you'll be struck by a burning piece of space rock traveling straight for your head.
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