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Prologue: My World - Page 02

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David Burner — :iconthetoastmancometh:
Jacob Martin — :icondocwario:
Hugh McKeown — :iconspmsl:
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TheDalekKing's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I find this a very unique first page, wonderful use of detail, and overall very well done.

Vision: I think you'll have to look at the comic page for this. 5 stars

Originality: It is unlike anything I've read! And this is only the first page of what looks to be a very well done comic series! 5 stars.

Technique: I will honestly say I believe you have done a good job on this as well. Even though it isn't a 5 star, I still think you did a wonderful job. 4 stars.

Impact: It is very moving and I be inspires others to make well made comics that will catch someones eye when they look at it. 4 1/2 stars.

Overall: It is a very well done comic and is very entertaining, even if there is only one word in this comic page. I did notice, though, you missed the cutie marks, I think that should be a work on in the future, well done! Keep this up!

Overall rating: 4 1/2 stars, very well done.
TheDalekKing's avatar
In the impact section, it says 'I be inspires', it should be 'I bet inspires'.
Ah, this page looks familiar. I do believe I have seen this comic before, in a time long past.
RamdanNFR's avatar
That was AWESOME !!!
I love your comics ...
JNinelives's avatar
Very beautiful :).
DrX-Raven's avatar
Dr. X: Pfft, please... I can show you what is much more beautiful than that!
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kantayeni's avatar
Their cutiemarks are missing.
TSWT's avatar
yeah i plan on touching up the old pages to remove some of the more blatant mistakes
SFS-Lovenought's avatar

Incredible dialogue, really.

The eloquence AJ displayed on this page moved me to tears IRL.

Lopoddity's avatar
Amazing colors. Cutiemarks are missing.:)
TSWT's avatar
oh gosh. you're right. the prologue has quite a few problems artistically, i will go back and patch them up some day.
JETJK3's avatar
One page and and i'm already saying WOW this is beautiful right out in the beginning
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YinReneeMoonveilYang's avatar
i am going to read this through,it seems very interesting
^^
Phenometron's avatar
An amazing view the ponies are seeing.
Eagle1Division's avatar
Wow is right... :O !!
Iron-Chef-OR's avatar
This whole series is gorgeous! Great job!
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Tridgeon's avatar
hey, Id love to paint a rendition of this scene, I'd give you due credit... is that O.K. with you?
TSWT's avatar
it is very okay
lassengan's avatar
wooow this is lookin promising and your style its awesome
Shinobody's avatar
"Everyone" includes readers, apparently.
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