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Prologue: My World - Page 01

And so our story begins.

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AuroraScribe's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Vision: As a huge fan of the show and also a fellow fanfic writer, I'm immediately impressed by the style.

Originality: While I agree with gunshun101 about the small mark against originality, it also boosts its impact because it fits so seamlessly with MLP:FiM.

Technique: The style resonates the show, from coloring to appearance. I probably wouldn't question this if it actually appeared in an episode, it looks that natural.

Impact: It makes me curious about what event(s) this is for, which then draws me into each part looking for more clues. You really can't ask more from a piece of art, wonderfully done.
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Hey, thanks! I plan on doing all the chapter titles as fim-styled stained glass, unfortunately, so I can’t make up that lost star, but I’m super-happy you think the rest of it is good!
odahilys's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

As a brony myself, i immediately noticed the art design similar to that of the Discord episode. That does knock off half a star for both originality and technique, however it is still does wonderfully. I didn't quite get an emotional impact other than "awesome", however the simplicity of the background with the overlay of the image does strike that feeling of happiness-in-the-dark type thingy. That also led me to believe that the story which this cover is designed for also resembles such a theme, so the vision category gets a 5. Overall, great job on creating this wonderful cover and i hope to read your story soon!
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Yeah, you’re right, I was trying to ape their stained glass design.

Also I’m still trying to learn how to imbue my pictures with real emotion. I’m not very intuitive when it comes to such things unfortunately.

Anyway, thanks for stopping by to let me have your thoughts! Critique from other deviants is basically 85% of the reason I bought a membership for this account in the first place.
odahilys's avatar
And that is where the magic of DeviantArt lay. Keep up the good work :)
DRJR6PN's avatar
Nice book new comic ^ ^ 
Let's get down to it, then.
ZanarNaryon's avatar
How would you feel if this actually got released as a paperback comic?
TSWT's avatar
i have no idea. who would be doing the releasing?

is this like "i pay someone 3000 dollars to do a bunch of copies and sell them at cons?"

or are we talking like hasbro comes up to me and says "YOU'RE HIRED"
ZanarNaryon's avatar
Hypothetically thinking
TSWT's avatar
yeah, but which kind of hypothetical are we going with?
ZanarNaryon's avatar
Just if your comic got released as a paperback copy, like a IDW comic
TSWT's avatar
if hasbro decided that my comic was worth a physical release that would be really cool :] i'd want to fix up a few of the earlier pages though
RamdanNFR's avatar
That was AWESOME !!!
I love your comics ...
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Phenometron's avatar
Epic opening here. ^^
Domesticated-Hermit's avatar
I really have to applaud the writing of this comic, its so canon I just hear the character's voices inside my head automatically
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TSWT's avatar
heheh, thanks! I was never altogether sure if character writing was one of my strong points but I guess it's another gift God's given me.
dont have much time, but I saw the cover, dang, it looked like a movie: and this, like the cover has the mystic unknown, adventurous, yet beautiful look and feel like kingdom hearts... I'll have to read it... but hey, this is a story worth developing (I saw like pg7)
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hey cool! hope you keep enjoying it
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