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Supah-Fuzz's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I have to say, your art style is quite stunning. The lighting, object placement and expressions really make for a unique feeling. You definitely have a clear vision of where you want the story to go so far, keeping the reader on the edge of their seat. I believe you should keep your quality over quantity approach going. People should definitely learn that this takes time and that if you rushed it this would not have the same atmosphere as you put forth. This should definitely develop into probably one of the best comics (although it's too good for that title, haha.) I've seen on DeviantArt. I hope to see more from you in the future. <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
TSWT's avatar
well thank you! although i do not think this is too good for the comics label; I think comics are a stone cold fantastic medium for telling all kinds of stories.
sleepy-writer's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

this is a truely great comic and i wish to see more soon,the only thing that could ever.possiable.make this comic ANY better,would have it be less time in between the comics,so you wouldn't have to wait a decade to read the next one <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> !man,it's hard to write a a 100+ critique! so you can stop reading because i am going to be random from this point on! i am princess luna! thuo shall bow down to thou princess!!!...tia,why are they not bowing to thei? I SAID BOW TO THIO PRINCESS OF THE NIGHT!!! ( i told you i was going to be random lolz)
TSWT's avatar
yeah, sorry it takes so long. i'm glad you like it though
Foxybus's avatar
Its okay if something takes long!
Put time and effort in your work. dont rush.
Phoenixinator's avatar
..Was about whatever is about to come through that door...
JACK13386's avatar
when the next page
For future reference, Spike, I'd suggest ditching the ball of yarn; it's only slowing you down.
stitch62651's avatar
I'm going to miss this comic, and I'm looking forward to future projects!
Forever-Pegasister's avatar
what was the dream What ??? WHAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!111crying :crying: rvmp Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon 
devildragon1's avatar
28 28........WERE IS 28!!!!!!!!!!
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samykhadre's avatar
the next is for wen ?
NebulaNyx1's avatar
its sad to see this get canceled. It had such potential. 
Gazellete's avatar
It's not cancelled you know........... 
NebulaNyx1's avatar
Umm the author said its not being continued. 
LuvLuvDarkness's avatar
*eyes twitching* the 'next' button isn't working. I clicked it like a hundred times and nothing happened.
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monika41's avatar
I need to say the door isn't suppose to be in  there or bed is moving 
DrX-Raven's avatar
Raven: ..... A pencil and.... a thingie?
StreamSecret's avatar
heh heh, spike........

wow, your artwork is really pretty, i love it! 

and please continue. you're doing a great job Nod 
CoolCoolSkies's avatar
So this won't be continuing if I read your update correctly, right? It makes me so sad since it is so pretty and looks so interesting.
XvampeXX's avatar
no more next page ?
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