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DramaticLlamasHobbyist General Artist
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This is a very lovely piece of art work, the way the water colors go its just an amazing job. Though, ive seen many like this before i have to say this is one of my favorites. Her eyes have a certain depth and the shading is absolutley MARVELOUS. I also love how the pencil kind of fades into the water color, this type of art work takes plenty of skill and practice.; I applaud you, though this didnt really click with me-unlike your other pieces its an amazing art pieces none the less. Good job and i wish you the best of luck!
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tsukiko-kiyomidzuHobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much, friend, for the interesting critique! :) (Smile) 
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DramaticLlamasHobbyist General Artist
No problem, sorry if its worded weird my keyboard doesn't work very well and this is my first critique. x3
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Shuri-ShoHobbyist Digital Artist
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The overall drawing is nice, but maybe the shoulder could be a little more complimenting to the skin tones in the face. I really love the color pallet, but I feel like it's losing it's feeling with all the white space on the left side. I really think this work is strong, and it has a lot of feeling to it, but it could be stronger if you wanted it to be. Maybe even go digital and add more stuff? Not that it needs a ton, just... make it work, ya know? It's really lovely though, and there isn't too much else other than the right eye is a little darker than the left, not sure if that's due to lighting, but I draw figures a lot, so....
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tsukiko-kiyomidzuHobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for a critique! ^^ Hug 
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Shuri-ShoHobbyist Digital Artist
Anytime! :)
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MoonShadowSevenProfessional Traditional Artist
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i think you are showing a consistency of style and technique in your work, which is so valuable. The use of thick and thin lines that conveys so much thought and emotion is impressive. i think you should just keep doing what you are doing and any lessons that need to be learned, i have confidence, that you will learn them through your own process of creating... good job!!
i did not give you a full five for originality because i am seeing this kind of style as a sort of trend but no less awesome. i still enjoy seeing your work.
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tsukiko-kiyomidzuHobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much *_* 
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Beautiful artwork, the title suits it perfectly, I love the usage of the colors and lines, it creates the illusion of a river that is washing the girl away from the rest of the world.
The colors themselves are gorgeous, I love the use of the dark blue in the bottom right corner, it captures the sadness of the girls eyes. The mixture of colors over all is nice, but the use of yellow in the picture is not my favorite. The color scheme is mostly purples and blues and the yellow/green in the picture does not really go with the whole set up, I would either remove all traces of yellow or else try to give it more of a presence.
The inking is wonderful, It looks like a black and white photograph.
The eyes are stunning but although they capture what the girl is feeling, they don't have much depth to them. The girl is obviously going through some emotional trauma but here eyes do not show the full extent of her feelings.
Once again, beautiful artwork.
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tsukiko-kiyomidzuHobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for a great critique! ^^ Hug 
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You're very welcome 
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The first and most noticeable and obvious thing here is that this piece is a lot more colorful than your prior one, but it's still good!
Also, like last time, you continue to do a good job with the use of negative space, however, I think there maybe a little too much negative space this time around - or really, just too much white in the background that can distract the viewer from the piece as a whole. Situations such as this may leave the viewer thinking that this could be an unfinished piece, and/or a "What if" thought process, in regards to what else could be added. This isn't necessarily a bad thing because it gets the audiences minds to work, however, in turn, for you as the artist, it all depends on what message you're trying to convey, if any at all.
You've succeeded in making it looking like this was a mix-media piece with water-color effect, a bit of graphite/perhaps charcoal, and oil in the corner. And the title for this, "FORGOTTEN", I think works well because the look you capture in her eyes CLEARLY shows that! Could this be why the background is white, because a once colorful, happy woman, who is now forgotten, fades away and any thought or idea of her becomes nothing more than a distant memory that's left in the past? I don't know, lol, just my thoughts. Nonetheless, again great work!
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tsukiko-kiyomidzuHobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for an awesome critique! ^^
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JustinGBrownProfessional Traditional Artist
Not a problem! Glad I could be of help! :)
pieton's avatar
this is beautiful 
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MclaramuntHobbyist Traditional Artist
Astonishing!
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tsukiko-kiyomidzuHobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much!^^ 
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MclaramuntHobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome
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ajayan96Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
sexy
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tsukiko-kiyomidzuHobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you!!^^ 
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Beautiful ♥
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tsukiko-kiyomidzuHobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you )) 
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You welcome :)
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I'm impressed.  Nicely done!
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