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Switchchick's avatar
I love this story! I really like that she didn't switch back but made her new life better. Would like to see that more. I'd love to see your take on the movie wish upon a star. Where sisters that aren't that far in age but have completely different personalities switch.
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Berkhart's avatar
Great beginning. I LOVE stories with unfair and horribly uneven swaps.
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Noix01's avatar
Great story.  Glad to see the new Amy make the best of her situation and Caitin squander hers.
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applepye234's avatar
Amazing story! Absolutely Loved it! 
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PlanetoftheAP's avatar
Very nicely written, but terrifying too. A very unfair swap for poor Cait.
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anavt's avatar
i agree cait at the end aged 25 years. she is bachelor and doesn't have any children. she only have her job and since she is already 48... she will work again around 15 years. her future seems particularly sad. :'(
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