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the blue fly



I should have done that in the first place...

I like that much better than the fly with the leave and stuff background - hope so do you
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

As I was browsing through your gallery, this piece immediately caught my attention. You are right, it is better than the one with the green leaves, because the colors in one make it slightly surreal.
Three things that make this digital painting so beautiful:
1. The colors and light; there is such a wonderful, cool atmosphere. I especially like the turquoise on the fly's body.
2. The water drops; they are really a nice touch and help build up the environment.
3. The details and texture of the fly are very realistic.
Two things that I think could be better:
1. The eyes of the fly are too smooth, I think there should be more texture there.
2. The white line marking the bottom of the closer wing should also have more detail.
I don't really know much about digital art, but I hope this critique was helpful.
<img src="…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/> *nfaas