Avania Comic - Issue No.5, Page 18

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Moorsley probably wasn’t planning to hit the silk under these circumstances… As if dealing with Una wasn’t enough! Stay tuned, this might get hairy...

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Drawn: 2020

Analysis: 
This page shakes things up with a less typical layout (I can only recall using something similar once before) and some slightly slanted gutters! I think it all works out nicely, and stands out without being an elaborate one-of-a-kind composition kind of page. Like the rest of this chapter though, I really love how the panel art turned out, and the focus on conversation, expression, and character interaction was really fun to draw. Una and Charlotte climbing up on the upper bunk also made for some more interesting panel compositions too and encouraged creative "camera" placement. Not a whole lot to say other than that I think this page is great, and is probably my overall favorite for this scene!

If I drew it again: 
Not really anything that bothers me on this page, so I don't think I'd change anything.

Favorite Panel:
Panel 6, for the dramatic angle, variety of poses/expressions of personality, and Charlotte's knowing glance aside...
Also the last panel again because anxious!Moorsley is adorable.


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Depending on where I am with Issue No.6 come mid-October, there may or may not be another chapter ready to go... I'd like to start offering printed comics soon though, so I may take some time to get all of that taken care of during the natural pause in the story.
I will of course make a proper journal entry about with details when the time comes, but if you'd like to give me your feedback, I'm always happy to hear it!

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