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The sharp end by Transformers-Mosaic The sharp end by Transformers-Mosaic
Story by;
Josh “Richter” van Reyk [link]

Art, Colors & Letters by;
Waseem “Ninjha” Bashar [link]
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CreeperSpaniel Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2008
oooh, got im' good! darnet!
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SHADOWPRIME Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
D: goddamn impactor, his death record is almost on par with Prime's XD Awesome mosaic, nice to see old characters reinvisioned.
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Professional Interface Designer
Lockdown looks like Lobo (DC) to me. He's got a hook and these bad red eyes surrounding with paint.
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AosakiKeiko Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Hobbyist
Xaaron can't be dead! *points at the background*
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VenomX1 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
This doesn't really fit in Animated Lighthearted stories. It's way too violent. I don't think you'd see someone get impaled like that on TFA.

The art is nice though. Nice work.
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Kingoji Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
Actually, I wouldn't be surprised at all. Especially when you consider how tragic a charater they made Wasp, literally driving him insane and not just having him comically insane from the start.
And then of course there was the on screen disintegration of Lugnut in the season two finale which was so casual it was horrible.
So yeah, I can see the series getting darker as it rolls on.
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lonegamer7 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Consistency took a hit here.

But nice capturing his backstabbing (literally) technique.
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NuclearConvoy Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
Is it just me or does Lockdown's head keep changing size nd shape?
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breaker82 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Student
no the art is just really bad, but i like the story, its diffrent and the violence is unexpected in a tfa story
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ProoowlingNinja Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
Woah! Let's think before we speak! That's very rude to say and act like it's nothing.
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DelusionalHell Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why do you have to say things like "the art is just really bad" and seem to expect it to be acceptable?

I'd like to see you take a crack at it.
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NuclearConvoy Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
Poor Impactor keeps getting used as a sacrificial lamb. He's been around long enough that he desrves to appear as a full-fledged character with his own schtick.
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ninjha Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
Isn't there is a literary term for that type of character, I believe it's "stock character" or a character used to give dimension to the protaganist?
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NuclearConvoy Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
Not quite. Stock characters are solely stereotypes without their own unique features.
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JZLobo Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! I never noticed the uncanny resemblance between Lockdown's and Impactor's arms. Considering how many Easter eggs they put in Animated, I wonder if that was intentional.
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optimus304 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
ohhh i like the decepticon. wrekage was it?
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NuclearConvoy Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008
The only remotely "decepticon" character in this page is Lockdown, and he's more freelance.

The other two visible characters are Impactor, first leader of the Wreckers (the one fighting Lockdown) and Xaaron, a high up autobot from the Marvel comics runs.
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breaker82 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008  Student
i read and re-read this one. the story is good but the art is lacking. there is no flow, very messy and i dont know who, where or when this is taking place. i think the mosaics were being nice by posting this up. i'll be very surprised if this one gets any favs. better luck next time.
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DelusionalHell Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dude...you're an asshole. If all you're going to do is be rude, why don't you go somewhere else and stop being a troll?
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breaker82 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Student
no no its just constructive critism
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DelusionalHell Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Saying you'd be surprised if it got any favs and that TFM was being NICE by putting it up is not constructive criticism, it's RUDE. You should showcase some of your own work before saying something like that. Get your head out of your ass.
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breaker82 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2008  Student
i'm only giving my opinion, not once have a said artist is a jerk or an @$$hole, i am not judging the individuals involved with this piece. am sure they are great people. most here are hoping to go pro, if they can't handle some comments here, how will they survive the real world?
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WhiteRabbitInk Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2008   General Artist
Crits and comments are one thing, but with your approach, I wonder how YOU survive the real world.

Oh wait, that would be assuming you'd actually say these things to someone's face.
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breaker82 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2008  Student
but you must admit, i am not far from wrong. the stats don't lie, for example take a look at this low fav count, compared to others. i don't think the artists feelings are hurt, besides how will they ever know what is wrong unless you are brutally honest
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WhiteRabbitInk Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2008   General Artist
It's not about the work when you're being rude man. And no, you don't NEED to be "brutally" honest. You have a total lack of tact when it comes to critiquing here, and if you keep it up, I'm going to ban you from this gallery.
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DelusionalHell Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Practice a bit more tact in your crits.
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ninjha Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
haha... thx for your support
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TaintedTamer Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ooooo, interesting. :D
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