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Old Youth by Transformers-Mosaic Old Youth by Transformers-Mosaic
Story by;
Martin “Tronprogram” Fisher [link]

Art, Colors & Letters by;
Andy Turnbull [link]
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3r6O Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2008
I heard about Ratchet and Arcee in the past, but not that computer-like contraption...
It looks like Vector Sigma or the Magnificence...
Anyway, good work!
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ninjha Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2008
Very epic story you have here. Almost similar to the Omega Supreme one. Interesting that in both cases the enemy is an entity of some kind.
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nessa-gordon Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
This would be awesome if it were a parody of Portal. I'm strongly reminded of GLAdos... or however you capitalize her name. :D
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JZLobo Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I have to agree with the others, the writing was a bit patchy here.
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ladyrazorsharp Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
Wow, very nice. Reminded me a little of the movie, "Something Wicked This Way Comes," where trying to turn back the clock had some nasty repercussions...except Ratchet made the right choice.
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breaker82 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Student
classical art technique used here, very clean and precise, but like the others i don't get the story. it's too vague. is it part of another story?
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TaintedTamer Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice! Interesting story...way to go Ratchet. :D
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:iconseiberwing:
Seiberwing Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
So...what's the device supposed to be?
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:icontronprogram:
tronprogram Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Professional Artist
A spy during the great war. It says so in the second panel :)
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Seiberwing Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
Yeah, but is it supposed to be a G1 cameo character or an OC or what?
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:icontronprogram:
tronprogram Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Professional Artist
An original character.
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MrMunkeepants Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
judging from the amount of confusion in the responses, I don't think it wasn't explained well enough. what was it? how would it give Ratchet his youth? too many questions for a one-page story! if you worked with the artist to give more of a back story, it would be welcome!
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breaker82 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Student
i think its good to wonder and for the reader to fill in the blanks. this leaves more for the story to develop
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Sithking-Zero Featured By Owner May 26, 2009
I kinda thought it was a parody of Batman and the OMAC's in DC Comics' "Infinate Crisis" storyline.
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Blackvegetable Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
Interesting!
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VenomX1 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
Uh? Dont get this story. What does it refer to?
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tronprogram Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008  Professional Artist
Well, I thought it would be interesting to see that if Ratchet was given the chance to get his youth back, he's always complaining and being called old, would he take it?

And it involves him solving a problem from his past. Namely the device he put together in panel 2.
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RaceConvoy Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
What the heck was that?
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dyiyi Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
Rachet is always caring about the past.
But he caught now.
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blackhellcat Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2008  Professional General Artist
Sad.:(
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Readasaur Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2008
Could someone tell me the story, here?
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lonegamer7 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
And you can never really go back. :thumbsup:
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0ArmoredSoul0 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What did he kill?
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