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Nemesis Nightmare: The Chaotic Destroyer by Transformerbrett97 Nemesis Nightmare: The Chaotic Destroyer by Transformerbrett97
In a past life he was a changeling assassin ordered by Queen chrysalis herself to kill Princess Celestia. he had Managed to Infiltrate her personal Guard and was so close to killing her, but his plan was foiled by a gray flash and the sight of a wounded Pegasus, he managed to flee, but when Chrysalis got word she wasn't please. Stripped of his power to change, broken and near death he wandered into the Evergreen forest and into the path of a lone creature, who had the power to bend reality it's very will. The Creature made a deal with the Changeling, he would give it unimaginable power to help him get revenge against those who betrayed him. He agreed, and the creature sent dark chaotic Energy into him. When he awake he was no longer a Changeling but a creature Reborn from Hatred and Chaos. Now If anyone steps in his path your done he’s no friend, or Allie, he’s a destructive force, a chaotic destroyer, he is Nemesis Nightmare. Decepticon by Transformerbrett97 

Official pony enemy of my pony oc Saber 
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TheEasterArt Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, I think you need a little criticism for the writing. 

First of all: You have a few random capitalisation in your text and some of them doesn't read right to me. e.g. ". he had Manage to Infiltrate her personal Guard"

Secondly: It's "Everfree" not "Evergreen"

And lastly: I suggest you put a full stop after allie and instead of typing "he's", and use "He is"
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Transformerbrett97 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
XD thanks I’ll be sure to take note of your critic
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Xxbronydragon Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Awesome 
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Transformerbrett97 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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Xxbronydragon Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2018  Student Digital Artist
You are welcome
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thomasformerswars101 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
awesome job mate
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Transformerbrett97 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :) besure to read the Backstory :) 
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thomasformerswars101 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
ok
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