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Winter Dreams

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By tracy-Me
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ice dust drifts
from frozen sky;
delicate crystals
cascade, like silence,
into fog.
an enchanting death,
earth blending upwards
into heaven: all is
white, and nothing
has an end.
I wonder if heaven is frozen, too?
I wrote this (recently) while thinking that the ground tends to disappear into the sky when it snows, and then I saw the #SkyAndNatureClub's contest for White, so I submitted it. :D

Recently found a gorgeous painting by ~NancyvandenBoom that made me think of this poem. Go check it out: [link]
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Thank you very much! :D
KiusLady's avatar
Those first two lines are great!
You do a good job of capturing the captivating and desolate qualities of winter :)
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:D Thank you so much! I really, really appreciate your comment! :hug: