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Taunt me.

Tease me.

Kick me.


You don't know how it makes me feel.

My heart is bleeding
yet screaming for more.

A devilish curse has been placed upon my soul.

Abuse me

As I am gasping for another breath
wishing for nothing
but a suicidal death.

I feel so
                                                     Depressed
but its all in my head.

The pain you are putting me through
seems to be my only cure.

I am worthless..

I am useless..

I am nothing..

..without you.

Save me.

as I fall further and further
away from the world.

Want me.

Take a needle
pin my heart
on to your chest.

Lying in my bed, I dream of you
..as I die tonight.

All I want from you

Kick me.

Tease me.

Taunt me.
:shrug: Take it for what you like.
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:iconsodawitch:
sodawitch Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2008
aww its a wonder poem so very sad though :) :( (i'm not sure which to put) :( :)
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2008
glad you like it
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midnightbluestar14 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2008
so ture i luv it really
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sleepymoogle Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2005
Glad i poked about your gallerey this is wow, nice i like the clipped feeling to the verse. Thanks for reading hollow you might like "Syn" as well if you ever get a chance to go read it :)
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2005
thanks and no problem :D
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:iconsleepymoogle:
sleepymoogle Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2005
Thanks and your very welcome.
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:iconxsilver82:
xsilver82 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2005
I love it very cool :blowkiss: and :hug:
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:iconconsumingdarkness:
ConsumingDarkness Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2004
Ooo... Darkness likes dis a lot.... :nod: Yesh.... its my kinda poem ;)

'Pin my heart on to your chest.' <--- LOVE IT!
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2004
:giggle: thanks!! :glomp: :)
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:iconrebelx:
rebelx Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2004
love it - sexy
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2004
lol ;) sexual hehe

thank you :blowkiss:
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:iconhippified-goth:
hippified-goth Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2004   Writer
Wow powerful, I love it :) :D :!:
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2004
:blush: thanks!! :glomp: :)
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:iconsarahsoda182:
sarahsoda182 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
oooh this is really awesome syl! .. and to think, i thought you were a blonde! :no: .. :giggle: aaah jk.. ^^ great work, very interesting feelings portrayed.. i like the way you did it!
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2004
:D merci bleauchunks! :giggle:

i .. AM .. blonde.. :slow: i don't get it, i thought u knew i was blonde? :confused: are you colour blind?? :lmao: jjj//kkk :XD:

thanks again :bow: :) ;P
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LeoCross2158 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
I like it
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
thanks :)
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:iconbluethunder:
BlueThunder Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
cool it would be a great name for a band!! ;)
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
hehe thanks :)
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:iconbluethunder:
BlueThunder Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
no probs its cool and i want to say sorry i havent been about much!! i plan to make it up to everyone!!
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
:lol: its all good :hug:
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:iconbluethunder:
BlueThunder Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
cool i knew you'd still love me!!! hee hee :)
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2004
lol aww of course i will :hug: hehe
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:iconsiempreyo:
SiempreYo Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow... i mean really...:wow: this has got to be one of the best pieces i have read here on DA. it's so different with it's message and really gets you into the poem. i absolutely love it and i think you did a fantastic job!!!! :shocked: this is amazing syl. see what happens when you submit stuff?? you get so many good compliments and +favs!! and you're about to get another one. fantastic work.

(although, i have to slap you for thinking this way....:slap: - :giggle:.) you know i love you hun!!

~:kiss: :analprobe: :hug: :analprobe: :smooch: :analprobe: :kiss: :analprobe: :heart: :analprobe: :cuddle: :analprobe: :blowkiss: ~
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
:wow: wow, really. i didn't think u would like it so much :giggle:

:hug: :hug: :hug:

yes, indeed, i needed that slap for thinking that way. me was sad for 2 days :lonely: but i'm better nooooww :smooch: :giggle:

i love you toooooo! :heart:

:analprobe: :hug: :heart: :rose: :smooch: :hug: :heart: :blowkiss: :cuddle:


p.s i thought those emoticons u put at the bottom were in a pattern.. but they weren't, and as i looked at it more it started to confuse me cuz i was looking for a pattern. its the probe's fault. curse it, curse it!! :shakefist: hehehe :hug:
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:iconsiempreyo:
SiempreYo Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yea, i really liked it, but i didn't like the fact that you were so upset!! *tear* you should have said something or noted me!! i would have replied. i'm glad you are better hun. xoxo

HAHA!!!!! i can't believe you thought they were in a pattern!!! you're so funny! :giggle:
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2004
.. :lonely: I should have told you i was upset.. but i guess i was too.. sad to mention it to anyone. even my family. my mom really had to poke it out of me :poke: :giggle:

well, enough about me being sad, that was the past.. you seem to be sad right now. your "mood" on ur page says so "petting" i'll note you later about it, ok babes?

:smooch:

take it easy for now!

smile, be happy :D


:hug: :cuddle: :heart: :rose:.. :cheese: ;) lol
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:iconsiempreyo:
SiempreYo Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww i'm sorry syl. :hug:

hahhaahaah, petting? lol ^^ you're too cute hun.. :smooch:
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2004
lol i meant :petting: ** :giggle:

:hug:
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pixel-vinckx Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
this is beautifull, me luvz it *kiss*
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
thanks, i'm glad you do :blowkiss: :)
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:iconvekin:
vekin Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
depress feeling.but great :`P
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:iconvekin:
vekin Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
depress feeling.but great :`P
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
thanks :hug:
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:iconzeal-the-piggy:
Zeal-The-Piggy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2004
That is very...
deep.
It's so depressed but so amazing. I love it...
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
:wow: wow that was the perfect comment i was waiting for :faint: hehe

thank you so much, i'm glad you like it and understand it :glomp:
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:iconzeal-the-piggy:
Zeal-The-Piggy Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
Well....You're very welcome. ^^''
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darkkavenger Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2004
I understand these feelings very well, and this is a nice piece of poetry!
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
thank you so much!! ++ :)
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:iconsombermuse:
Sombermuse Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2004
hope ye feel better, this is damn good writing, another writer for me to look up to, beautiful work :hug: :glomp: :hug:
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
thanks for the concern :heart:

aww, ur too sweet :) :hug: :blowkiss:
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:iconsombermuse:
Sombermuse Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
=)
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:iconscizor:
scizor Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2004
:| This is amazing. :+fav:
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
:blush: wow, glad you like it :glomp:
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:icondemonknight:
demonknight Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2004
:o Cooooooo`...
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
:giggle: thanks!
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:icondemonknight:
demonknight Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
Welcome. :) (:laughing: hehe!)
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2004
:rofl:
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