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- F O O T S T E P S - by toymachine11 - F O O T S T E P S - by toymachine11
I look outside my window,
my eyes I can't believe.
Their seems to be some footsteps
right outside my door.
No one is home,
I am all alone,
and heard no one come to the door.
I open the door,
and step outside
as the blistering cold
freezes my toes.
I take a closer look;
one footprint,
two footprint and three..
They stop.
I place my foot on-top of the first;
these footprints must be those of a giant...
they are five sizes too big!
On to footstep number two I suppose,
its getting kind of chilly and I'm not even wearing a robe.
Mystery surrounds me,
as I see the next footprint comes to a halt,
I can't seem to stop
walking down this road.
My left leg reaches out,
and stretches as far as it can.
I plant my foot on the final footstep,
breath in a breath of cold crisp air
and mysteriously disappear,
into the thick air.


The last picture and poem of my three part series called "Cold winter" I hope you enjoyed them...I did :) Blah, but the poetry I'm no good at..came up with it on the spot for all three!! I hope it doesn't snow anymore this season though!!! :aww:

OTHER PHOTOS FROM THE "COLD WINTER SERIES":
- B E H I N D G L A S S - [link]
- D E C E I V I N G - [link]

All comments and :+fav:s are appreciated!
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:iconelectom:
Electom Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2005   Writer
nice mix between pic and poetry, did you write this?
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2005
yup :D and thanks
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GoblinQueeen Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2005
Beautiful shot, very nicely composed.
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2005
:aww: thank you so much :) :hug:
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-slip- Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
haha stick to photography =P just kidding, it's far better than i could do, not to mention a very cool picture.

wow, snow. been forever since i've seen that
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
:rofl: i know, i should, but i'm not very good at it either!! hahahaha

thanks!! :)

well.. there won't be any snow in montreal when you visit in the summer :giggle:
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-slip- Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
:o their better not be!
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2005
:glomp:
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:iconpedram:
Pedram Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005
s0 niCe shot.
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2005
thank you! :D
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:iconbeautyincorruption:
beautyincorruption Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2005
I really like this! It's not snowed here in ages :(
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2005
:petting: awww 'tis a shame. you can have some of mine *hands u a big pile* :) hehe
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:iconbeautyincorruption:
beautyincorruption Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2005
YAY! Thank you! Eheheh
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:icondreamergirl:
dreamergirl Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2004
these is the photo that i like more of your page:) its very nice, here in Spain is not usual that we have snow. Rememeber me the Cristmas
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2004
:D thank you very much! and i will remember you during christmas :giggle: :hug:
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BrokeNFaitHExE Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2004
great! congratulations !
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004
thanks! and a double thanks for the +fav! :D muchos gracias high five :highfive:
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BrokeNFaitHExE Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2004
np =)
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:iconcupcakes-r-yum:
cupcakes-r-yum Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004   Photographer
wow...I totally love this...
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2004
:glomp: thanks! :D
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:iconed-is-dead:
ed-is-dead Featured By Owner May 8, 2004   Writer
"the night torn mad with footsteps" - a Charles Bukowski (my favorite writer, or one at least) collection title

I like this, great texture, mood and contrast. The only problem is that the movement leads you right to the wall in the back, which hurts it.

- Ed
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner May 8, 2004
^^; yea, i guess the back wall does kind of screw it up..

glad you like it!! :D
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:iconed-is-dead:
ed-is-dead Featured By Owner May 8, 2004   Writer
no worries
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:iconhermes88:
hermes88 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2004
Looks great! I need to do some more b& w...
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2004
:nod: u should!! lol

thanks :hug:
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:iconamandizzle:
amandizzle Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2004
I love how its black and white, good job.
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2004
thanks :)
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:iconamandizzle:
amandizzle Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2004
yeah no problem :) lol
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:iconamandizzle:
amandizzle Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2004
I like it a lot.
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LeoCross2158 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2004
good job.
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2004
:) thank u
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:iconscrealo:
screalo Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2004   Photographer
great work! i love this picture!!
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2004
thanks!! :bow: =P :)
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:iconcaptainscurvy:
captainscurvy Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2004
i would appreciate it if u didn't resumbit deviations
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2004
kiss my natural black arse...lol, i changed the border 2 black instead of white so it wouldn't contrast...

*:ignore:*
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emotional-robot Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2004
awesome! I really like the last line "in thick air" Very creative of you. Totaly wicked dude. Keep up the gnarly poetry!
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2004
:w00t: thanks pal!! :D means more than u think to me..:nod:
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silentstrydergiant Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2004   Photographer
Nice and Tranquil and the from the peanut gallery " SNOW ROCKS!!!!! GO SNOOOOWWW I WANT IT TO SNOW!!!! GRRRR NO SNOW HERE ME JEALOUS" oh so in short very good picture, alright poem not bad, and yaeh coolness.
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2004
teehehe, thanks!! :D
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:iconsteihl:
steihl Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
It's snow...you spaminator.
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2004
:giggle: lol...^^;
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:iconpunker-fish:
punker-fish Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2004
cool!
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:iconiksfiluss:
iksfiluss Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2004
snieg jest boski! kurcze szkoda ze u nas tak krotko lezy:( ale za niedlugo to sie zmieni wynosze sie na spitsbergen =P , swietna pracka !!

pozdrawiam :hug:
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2004
dziekie!! :D

pozdrawiam cie tez :hug: :)
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hArshcRit Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2004
Well this is a good picture. The feel of it is good. It does not look so cold, but cold enought. The margin is ok but i think is too bright for the picture. A black border would have made a better contrast, if what you wanted to do was make an emphasis on the footprints. There is also a lack of light, the picture looks a little dark. This is why it probably doesnt portray that cold feeling. It is a good picture overall and it still portrays winter wonderfully. I'll be shure to check the rest of the series ^^.
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2004
thanks for the advice :nod: :)
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The----Rac Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2004
Another awesome work by sylvia hehehe. Another fav on the board!
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:icontoymachine11:
toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2004
:wow: thanks so much!!!!!!! :D :hug: :)
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cberry240 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2004
This is a step in the "professional touch" I was talking about, there seems to be some thought into the shot as well as the description. Nice work, keep working at making them cleaner, crisper, and creative
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toymachine11 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2004
thanks alot for the comment:)
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