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Oh yeah water balloons! How on earth would they fill these.....I have no clue XD. Oh well sue me. :P Hidden muffin too.


So yeah cool text huh? :D This comic is very different than my usual comics. There's a lot of dialog off screen between Pinkie and Rainbow Dash so I had to give it color bubbles instead of the plain white ones. You like it? :O This comic came out really well I think. That AJ pose was fun to do.


Anyway I have to take care of some things. Keeping this description short....ish. :P Remember comments and critiques always help me going forward. Enjoy guys.


Time spent: 18 hours over 3 days
How I did it: Paper + Photoshop CS5


PLEASE don't steal this. Remember to link this back to me if you put this on a site or something.



Applejack © Lauren Faust
Art © Me
Image size
1335x4537px 2.71 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Ok! This is mah furst critique so I'm sorry if I'm a little mean or something. Anyway, what i noticed with Applejack: her tail kinda looks like it was inflated like a balloon. I mean, it's flat and there's no "dramatic" sway (or something like that).

But other than that, this is pretty funny and I bet some people (or ponies) could relate to this. I've seen some other stuff that's similar to this, so that kinda impacts my rate to this.

Other thingies: I love it and so should the others. I'm still pretty surprised that AJ's sleepin' on the job. HATURS GONNA HATE!
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

as always another beautiful peace of workmanship
the colour and characters done just right excellent .
like everyone else that has and will see this comic
will always be waiting for more .now for word fill in
a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a a aa a a a a a a a a a a a a a
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next time i do one think il post same/simlar to person below my'n
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Toxic-MarioHobbyist Digital Artist
2 for originality?
matty4z's avatar
wasnt shore as what it ment? thort in sense for new charaters n such?
story and impact it had spot on
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Awesome as ever. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Vision:
Very close to the show's style, so it makes it look more official and believable. A load of hard work's obviously been shown, and the backgrounds are brilliant! I love the font, could you do coloured bubbles more often?

Originality:
While there is fifty (Million plus!) MLP comics, I haven't seen anything like this one, apart from Don't Disturb Dashie. It also makes you think, 'Oh no, what's gonnna happen now?' at the start.

Technique:
See vision

Impact:
BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Awesome, that is CLASS! I'm favouriting this for the comedic value, my gallery is looking a little dull! This'll be perfect to spice it up, it really should be used in the show too!

AWESOME.
Jolly good, tally ho!
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Toxic-MarioHobbyist Digital Artist
appreciate it!
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XEzeronaXHobbyist Digital Artist
Found the muffin :D
GameAddictedDragon's avatar
Ugh! I can never find the darn muffin! XD
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Ask-Eclipse-PonyHobbyist General Artist
Muffin:
Panel:2
Location :Behind fence
Part Shown:Just enough.
JarekzJezioran's avatar
Applejack has a wet dream ;)
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PonyGal202Hobbyist General Artist
love dat "it wasn't me!"
RtDK's avatar
'Course ya know, this means war.
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ARTEMIS56787Hobbyist Artist
i found it!
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xormakHobbyist Digital Artist
Sry Tox but this Muffin was WAY to easy =( BTW still awsome comic =D  you're one of my most favourite artists in the fandom.
Derpyisintown's avatar
Found teh muffin . Heheheh.
Drflash55's avatar
FOUND TEH MUFFIN! MY FIRST ONE!!
Bluberamena's avatar
I FOUND THE MUFFIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
to360's avatar
i saw the hidden muffin
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ZiggyUndeadHobbyist Traditional Artist
I swear, you are absolutely insatiable with the muffin hiding this time of year!
Still found it though! :iconimhappynodplz:
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YesImDeadpool General Artist
:iconfluttershyplz: Oh my, Applejack's soaking wet and clueless. =P

:iconpinkiepieplz: :lol:
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I CAN'T FIND YER STINKIN' MUFFINS!!!
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