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You listen to me when I'm talking to you!! by TothViki You listen to me when I'm talking to you!! by TothViki
"Zonic: *grabs her arm* Listen to me! Enough of this idiotic behavior! You two came here to be zone cops, so don't act like that! You can't talk to me like that, you must call me "sir", take it seriously, and-- YOU LISTEN TO ME WHEN I'M TALKING TO YOU! DON'T LOOK AT ZESPIO WITH THAT IDIOTIC SMILE! And I especially don't have time to put some sense into you two! If you don't like anyting, you can go home!
Zerci: *sigh* Okay.. Calm down, I get it. We're sorry. Are we okay? *holds up her hand for a high-five*
Zespio: Oh my--
Zonic: Pissed Off Sonic Icon .... *deep breath* I'll be at the training arena if you need anything.
Zector: Okay sir. Zander said he's waiting for you there.
Zonic: Great... -.-   "

*PERFECT ENGLISH* lol sorry I'm sure it has many grammar mistakes but I hope you understand. .-.

Oh boy, and I planned to translate the whole story to English the next year! Absolutely the worst idea ever... I've been translating these few sentences for a half hour. .-.

Never mind, I hope you like this drawing I made. :)
As you see, Zerci and Zoney really pissed Zonic out on the first day.  :D

Zerci (I mean Perci) (c) Sega
Zonic (c) Archie
Art (c) Me

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silverfam Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2018
:T
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Ink-Bear Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
poor zonic. maybe do some shooting training 8D ! <3
you did amazing job on this i love it! <3
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TothViki Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah thank you! ^^ <3 Yeah. XDD
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Ink-Bear Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
damn we should do someday a collap doing Zonic in our style 8D
-totaly not fan screaming over your zonic style- <333
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TothViki Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah sure!! :D We could do that! ❤ You want me to do the sketch of Zonic abd you would color it? :D :)
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Ink-Bear Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
yay! :meow: mh i though we do zonic complete just in our own style and put the pictures together
but that sounds even better!
maybe you do the sketch and i lineart and color it? idk xD
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TothViki Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh okay! :D Sounds great! ^^ But I can do it with lineart so it's easier for you to color it. ^^ I'll do it as soon as I can! ^^
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Ink-Bear Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
its fine, i love doing linearts but okay i will color it than!
so we work on one Zonic? im confiused now xD
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:icontothviki:
TothViki Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep. xD :D
Oh okay, you can do the lineart if you like doing that. :D I'll start the sketch then. ^^
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Blazemacska Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That kid's gonna suffer at the training XD
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TothViki Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zonic will suffer more. :'D
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FloofPuppy Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Zo why are zome of the characterz have z'z in their namez?

XD
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:icontothviki:
TothViki Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDD Accordig to the Archie comics everyone's name starts with z in the zone cops' dimension. :D
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FloofPuppy Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Student Digital Artist
It'z zo weird. XD
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TothViki Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ikr xDD It's so weird when I'm writing the story and I always have to think of their original names or I confuse them otherwise.
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FloofPuppy Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Oh yeah, I understand that you have trouble with English in your description of this. Is that true or am I off course?
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TothViki Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah I have problem with English. But next year almost all my lessons will be English lessons in my school so I can improve a lot! :)
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FloofPuppy Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Student Digital Artist
That's good to hear. What language do you mainly speak? C:
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:icontothviki:
TothViki Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hungarian. ^^
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Caeruleam Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks really nice^^
And a great story, and I didn't found any grammer mistakes, but I was also reading it super fast, so maybe overlooked some stuff xD
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TothViki Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha thanks! :D :D
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Caeruleam Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^^
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Undertaledude12 Featured By Owner May 17, 2017
I guess Zerci is attracting Zonic lol.
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TothViki Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha xDD
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TheAmazingGMan Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD LOLZ
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:icontothviki:
TothViki Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D :D
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TheAmazingGMan Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's hilarious XD
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