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Acid.Rain.Turbulence. - art

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In the future, a thick cloud covers the earth. When it rains, it rains acid. Humans have found a way to protect themselves. Lamps that create shields of light can block the acid. No one has ever directly seen the sun, at least not for over 200 years. Two people are out observing the remains of a city when the rain comes. It comes like a wall moving over 10 miles per hour. Everything the rain touches disintegrates within seconds.

I like the incongruent sounds melding together and then finally at the end come together harmonically. I like to think it represents the impending disaster and sense of loss reflected in the story and then the sudden hope. Then the cliffhanger.

Instruments: Strings, Bass, Slow Violin

The accompaniment to the music; give each line a few seconds and hopefully you get to the end when the song finishes (it's 7 minutes long):

Did you hear that?
What was it?
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The rain! It's back!
Oh God we're no where near a safety zone.
It's back that way. Just run!
Over the grass! Go!
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Ah! Help me! I can't get up! I caahh!-
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Almost there...
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The houses dissolve all around me.
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The gusts blow fiercely against me.
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Turbid fogs, swamps, water rushing.
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I can't make it.
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I can't make it.
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That light.
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I will not reach it.
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It is too far away.
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The buildings melt into puddles and mix with the water.
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The acid is falling on all sides.
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Gray horizon.
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I can see the safety lamp!
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It is there!
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The trees wither and die.
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The grass crumbles and becomes flat.
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One drop will go straight through you.
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How could we do this?
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Destroy our planet like this?
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To the point of paranoia of the rain
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And the turbulence of the skies
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These things called stars...
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They are just legend.
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Myths...
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Ancient tales to foster hope.
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Unrealistic.
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The world fades away.
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Just like the dissolving buildings.
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I run over the corroded grounds.
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The violent winds despise me.
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They want me to die.
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I will not let them kill this soul.
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I shall not be claimed.
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The lamp is right there!
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End.

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kazminya's avatar
awesomeness! The music and the lyrics. XD