tonimich

Truly poetic. I love the look on her face on the last panel and I say it took me for a loop. We all were explaining the "Oh my god I am a girl and a freak" reaction and we had such a wonderful new twist to it. I wish it was longer only to continue enjoying it even more. I cannot wait for the next page to be released and I hope to see more of this witty better than M.Night twists in the future. I mean come on who doesn't love a cut sphinx girl. I bet her kittens are so adorable. I'll adopt one. Might have to snag a potion or two to prevent them from eating me though.

I really enjoy the premise but like you said the change between 2 and 3 I kinda had to back track to realize that was him as a genie, he is now a cutie so I guess so all is well that ends well :3

I really liked where this went bit it feels a bit rushed. I understand that it had to fit in only a few panels to fit with the rest of the comic but the transition from panel to panel almost doesn't make sense or can cause a little bit of confusion. This all being said I think the premise is adorable. I mean he's evaded everyone till know and a cute little magic shop owner traps his now cute genie self. I cannot wait to see what fate has in store for him and the rest of this crazy cast.

She seems to happy with herself if you are looking for a reserved character, try adding bangs or letting her hear hang loose and unkempt. Like I said earlier she seems tomboyish so try a more timid pose or even her cry, something to bring out the girl in her. I think its hard because she's a cat girl and they're supposed to be bubbly so maybe a mouse girl, or a girl with wings, something that would make her stand out and be made fun of would help her be more reserved. So to make this long enough to be considered a critique, she's very pretty and cat girlish but try and cover up her eyes to draw more of a passive personality.

happy too :3