Is this the right way?

'The piece of paper that i found on my travel have markings of a rabbit, it seems that i'm invited to some kind of tea party somewhere. I think it's just convenient that someone notices my presence in this world. someone is still around, i find myself heading to the direction of the map, seems that the pattern is confusing so i think i got lost fairly quick, i don't want to stop my chance to finally meet someone new... oh wait look at the year of this map..."
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Hello there!
I hope that you enjoyed this painting and a little story that goes along with it, this week has been quite difficult since i woke up early in the morning only to arrive back home at 8 pm or 9 pm I have little time spend to paint. I however devoted a good amount of time to get this painting right, it was frustrating but i think i got it(?) So i hope you like this piece at least.
I'll try to do more in the future, if you have any suggestion do tell.
If you like this painting feel free to favorite it or share it with your friends or if you want to keep up to date with my upcoming picture don't be shy to give a watch! I appreciate it a lot
If you have any feedbacks or thoughts or questions do post them in the comments
Have a nice day