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Mature  |  Published: March 24, 2019
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© 2019 tommerch
Features characters and situations from Rei Hiroe's "Black Lagoon" manga and anime. Features nekkid lady, parlous situations, and a dead man.

Revy finds herself with some downtime during a hot, lazy day. She ends up down, hot and not at all lazy in the least. How will she get out of this one? (Hey - that could be a ti - oop! Already used it!)

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Hey, guys! Remember me? Yeah - so... this. I finally spit something out. Maybe now I'll finally get around to getting something together for C.A.B Ashley Closet's contest (that ended months ago... *SSHH! Let him think it's still going on! He MIGHT get something else done this year!*)

EDIT: Format issues and a couple of misspellings. 

Thos. Merchant
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Really great story, thoroughly enjoyed it.  Obviously I liked the BDSM elements, but the descriptions and murky setting you create captured my imagination.  Would love to read more.
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Ooooo that is much nicer looking now ^_^
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Really enjoyed this, but did it have to all be one paragraph? Made it pretty difficult to read in parts. I got wall of text eye strain. 
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tommerchHobbyist Writer
No - that was me having trouble uploading the firkin' story cuz, y'know, "d"A. So I ended up saving it as a text file and I didn't pay attention to the formatting before I uploaded it. I'll see if I can't fix that.

Thos. Merchant
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Aww i didn't mean to sound like i was judging or being too negative :(  I blame my eyesight the most haha. But yeah, paragraphing does make things easier to read. 
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tommerchHobbyist Writer
No - don't worry - you were fine. *I* didn't like it, either. Made it a better reading experience and I was able to boop a couple of spelling errors while I was at it. So it worked out all around. Thanks for bringing my attention to it!

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Well you're welcome then ^_^ I like to try to give some constructive feedback instead of just glowing praise but you never know how anybody is going to take it these days. Plus i'm not the best at wording things in a more polite manner. 
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guardian457Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting story, though I seem to remember Episode 7 Revy declaring that she had no interest in being tied up or tying other people up.
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tommerchHobbyist Writer
Wellllllll, yeah. Consider this a sub-multi-dimensional pocket universe where she didn't say that. Or something. Thanks for Fave-ing this!

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