tomdonaldson

Meli's Revenge #1 (2 pages) PAGE ONE (5 panels) Panel 1: The scene starts with the gorgeous Meli bursting through and slamming open the closed bedroom door where her boyfriend Derek is caught naked in bed with his latest fling. Both of them look in shock towards the door at the glaring girlfriend. Meli is wearing tight leggings and looks to be ready for the gym. She has one arm extended, opening the door. In her other arm she's holding up a futuristic looking ray gun. A gym bag is tossed to her side at the door. The room has clothing strewn about on floor, and a cat darts out the door. There is a nightstand with a lamp next to the bed. 1. NARRATIVE: She's scorned and had enough and this is the last time he'll ever cheat. 2. MELI: I knew it! 3. DEREK: Holy shit! Panel 2: Derek and his fling are still on the bed. They look up to the massive giantess Meli as rays from her shrink-ray hit them and shrink them down. In this scene they're about 12 inches and getting smaller. Meli: You're gonna regret every minute you've spent fucking these sluts! Derek: What the hell's going on... Naked Girl: Oh my God, this can't be happening! Panel 3: Meli is holding the now 6 inch naked girl in her right hand at eye level. In her other hand Derek is trapped. There's a TV mounted on the wall in the background. A news story about gardening is playing. The shrink ray is placed on top of the nightstand. Meli: Trust me bitch, you're about to find out this is DEFINITELY happening. Naked Girl: Ahhhhh! Derek: Please Meli, let us go! Panel 4: This is a split panel. One half of the panel shows the naked girl on the bed shrinking further as the shrink ray is firing right at her. Derek is still in Meli's other hand. The other half shows the now popcorn sized girl being pushed into Meli's mouth by her forefinger. NAKED GIRL: No, not in there Panel 5: This panel shows the naked girl inside Meli's stomach, pointlessly scrambling to climb back up. 11. NAKED GIRL: 12. BELLOWING SOUND FROM THE GIANTESS: Naked Girl: No, please, someone get me out of here! Meli, from somewhere outside: I know you can hear me in there, hope he was worth it. PAGE TWO (2 panels) Split page. Panel 1: The view of this panel is just at the back of the tiny Derek's head. This view is intended to give the reader the impression they're looking up at a massive beautiful giantess right in front of Derek. Derek is on the bed looking up at Meli. She's at the edge of the bed holding open her leggings, instructing him to jump in. MELI: Now be a good little slave and hop in. There is a small window of a panel placed in panel 1 showing the next step, which is Meli using her hand to sweep Derek into her leggings. Panel 2: This panel shows 6 inch Derek smushed against Meli's genitals, fruitlessly pushing away like he's trying to finish a pushup. 2. MELI (from outside the scene): Get ready to sweat, you've got a front row ticket.