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The Field of Cormallen by TolmanCotton The Field of Cormallen by TolmanCotton
Gouache and pencils on paper.
From The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien.

'A laita te, laita te! Andave laituvalmet! Cormacolindor, a laita tárienna!'

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Airswirlseternal Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012
I love it :D The way you have done the chainmail looks really good, and I really like the overall composition and colour scheme :clap: The way you put the arms in the foreground is also great as it makes it look like there is more depth :D I hate giving criticisms, but as you asked for critique I would say that maybe you could improve the piece by spending a bit more time on the flags, as they look a litlle bit too uneven in the shading, especially the Gondor one, but hey, what do I know? And I really like this piece overall, so it doesn't really matter :) Thankyou for uploading, made me smile to find this :love:
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TolmanCotton Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you for the criticism. In fact, in the course of years my idea of the flag design has changed a lot, and I don't like that much the way I did these ones, not only for the uneven colouring. Unfortunately, being on a sheet of paper, I can't correct it the way I'd want without ruining it, so I'm drawing another version of it.
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silima13 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2009
Beautiful work!
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