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Son of the Dragon: Vlad's Wedding

Grimmwoods 02 Second Draft

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Grimmwoods 02 Second Draft

NARRATOR Illinois... JEROME humming to self Let’s see..park should work to do some reading today. Gotta make sure I get a lead today. NARRATOR Jerome Cooper walked out of a library with three books tucked under his arm. He adjusted his glasses, ruffled his shaggy, brown hair, and walked down the road. JEROME yawn Took awhile to find this, but it should be worth it. NARRATOR Jerome kept walking, trying to relax as he continued down the sidewalk. He was a loner by nature, so he kept a distance from the few groups enjoying the beautiful afternoon. As he sat at the base of a tree, he saw a family playing in the park. With a clenched jaw, he stood and stormed away, the embers of jealousy forming in his heart. JEROME to himself I don’t need this... JACK O’LANTERN Yeesh and I thought I had issues… NARRATOR Unknown to Jerome, though, was that he was being watched, himself. Or that something was stalking through the trees of the park he walked through. JEROME Let’s see...aaah, here we
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Son of the Dragon: Vlad's Wedding

Grimmwoods 02 Second Draft

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Grimmwoods 02 Second Draft

NARRATOR Illinois... JEROME humming to self Let’s see..park should work to do some reading today. Gotta make sure I get a lead today. NARRATOR Jerome Cooper walked out of a library with three books tucked under his arm. He adjusted his glasses, ruffled his shaggy, brown hair, and walked down the road. JEROME yawn Took awhile to find this, but it should be worth it. NARRATOR Jerome kept walking, trying to relax as he continued down the sidewalk. He was a loner by nature, so he kept a distance from the few groups enjoying the beautiful afternoon. As he sat at the base of a tree, he saw a family playing in the park. With a clenched jaw, he stood and stormed away, the embers of jealousy forming in his heart. JEROME to himself I don’t need this... JACK O’LANTERN Yeesh and I thought I had issues… NARRATOR Unknown to Jerome, though, was that he was being watched, himself. Or that something was stalking through the trees of the park he walked through. JEROME Let’s see...aaah, here we

Fate/No Evil Pt. 4

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Fate/No Evil Pt. 4

Chapter 4: Don’t you mess with D.I.C.E. Now The morning after, Chihiro and Rider got to the whole swallowing of the gem thing. Rider re-summoned Aladdin to help with the deed. However, it seemed that the sleep seemed to have stripped Chihiro of any eagerness to do the deed. “Come on ya chicken, you were gung ho about it last night!” Rider said in frustration. “I know, but now that I have had time to think about it, it sounds ridiculous, but I know I gotta do this” Chihiro said, holding the gem in her hand, it was the size of a large Pearl, so swallowing wasn’t an issue. Rider threw his hands in pure absolute frustration “JUST SWALLOW THE GOD DAMN FUCKING GEM ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” “OK OK I’LL DO IT” Aladdin Chuckled slightly at this “perhaps if you drank some water with it, it would help?” “Good idea” Chihiro walked over to the fridge, opened it up and pulled out a bottle of water, and went back to his

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Grimmwoods Prologue Rough Draft

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Grimmwoods Prologue Rough Draft

(Gilgamesh: The following is a script created by four insects as a means to build attention for their project that I haven't even appeared in yet. They humbly request feedback, criticism, and auditions. Send a note to the poster if you desire to do the latter. Mongrels...) NARRATOR Fairy Tales, despite the name, is actually full of dark secrets and futures. After the story is said and done, what happens after their 'ending'? A world provides an answer to that. A world where all fantasy collides and where the stories all truly began. A world called Grimmwoods. Grimmwoods is a whole dimension home to many of fantastic worlds from the whimsical
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8 OC Facts: Lion Man

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A member of this superhero team that I couldn't really get a handle on at first...but is now probably one of my favorite members. Who doesn't like the Hair Trigger Temper sort of character? Like the rest of The Elite, Lion Man was made as an insert for someone in my life. In this case, my younger brother. He was about five when I asked him and he had this lion mask that he was just obsessed with, so he said he’d be a lion. Ty and I tried brow-beating him into a more superhero-y concept (imagine, two pre-pubescent boys being little craps to the smaller one), but we capitulated and made him an anthropomorphic lion character. As expected, Lion Man’s powers and role have been as erratic as anyone else’s concept. Originally, he had a Sonic Roar and could shoot hair from his mane like needles (Digimon was still new, I saw SaberLeomon, and…yeah). There was even a brief point when he was the brains of the operation…I don’t know what I was thinking, either. Lately, he’s settled as more of

8 OC Facts: Freeshooter

8 OC Facts: Freeshooter

Originally named "Sharpshot", I changed the name of the last of the four founding members of The Elite. Freeshooter was probably the second most recent character included. Though his inception was actually the impetus behind this incarnation. Why? I needed an origin story for the original bad guy of the series. Freeshooter’s own name has changed between now and the earlier draft. He was originally named Damian Edwards with his superhero name being Sharpshot. I figured that was a bit too…generic. And the pic I commissioned of him had a more tanned complexion than the others, so I decided he was ethnically Iranian. I renamed him to Damian Esfandyar and gave him the more eye-catching Freeshooter. His superhero outfit I kind of decided on early on. Everyone else’s outfit seemed cobbled together, so his was the opposite extreme—a more fancy getup and an opera mask. It helped him stand out more prominently from the others. In this remaster, a personality trait I decided on helped him

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