Oh my goodness. It's even better than I have expected. I love how you've taken these characters and redrawn them in your own distinctive style, yet it's still *them*.
Their expressions are also amazing. I don't even have the words for the personality in Yuna's expression, but I love the way you have Lulu's eyes tightening as if she's bottling up her emotions, the same way she straps herself into that danged corset. Very raw.
I'm a very clumsy artist, so I'm so very grateful that you (and one other, nidrig) were inspired and able to draw what I can only write!
Most of all: THANK YOU! It's perfect.