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I guessed it, but didn't really hit it. And you are welcome, you should put something up that i can actually critique hehe.

Hey there again, i am happy to see another awesome piece of work.

Let us begin shall we? hehe.

Vision:

When i first looked at it i was like.... Which way is up. When you look at which way she is sitting, and which way here hair and cape are going she could either be hovering there in spot, or she could be flying away, on a x and y axis.
The way the sun is in the background also throws me off, usually... wait a minute! I am lost! She could be falling?

I am going to give Vision 5/5 stars
Simply because i am going to keep guessing till Kire tells me which way. Darn you for confusing me!


Originality
As Kire said who doesn't know steam punk, and i am happy to say i have yet to see this steam punk.
The headgear, what exactly is that, a Gyro of sorts? Some sort of protective gear? Or maybe(complete speculation) a helmet that allows her to breath at higher elevations by pumping oxygen directly into the face?!?
The machine gun on the chest, is that for look or is that actually a part of her body? "I swear death patrol, i don't have any guns, bullets go flying out of her chest, killing all of them.

The Jet pack is a great touch too, tells you that it looks futuristic and exotic, but keeps within the idea of, HEY wen't can't really fly, we need to re-fuel every once in a while.

I will give Originality 5/5stars

Technique:
Alot of Kire's work is amazing, i have yet to see something that isn't so.
He does say he uses stocks and after looking at the stocks and comparing photos, where are they? I have seen alot of his work involves the melding of reality and fantasy reality. In this picture, he did and A+ job on using the stock and blending it completely into the world he has created.

I give Technique 5/5stars.

Keep up the great work.

Impact:
BAM!!!!!!!!
Other then leaving me confused, leaving me in aw and making a rather epic picture, not much more i can say on impact.

Impactu! a 5/5

Well DURRR, i gave it a 20 stars, he almost has enough stars to get him self another 1 up!(Hehe Super Mario World Reference)
Big deal so what, wanna fight about it?!

Again, keep up the good work Kire, can't wait to see the next one.

First off i would love to say that this is a great artist, everything he does is amazing. The time you put into this shows greatly in the detail and the setting you create.

Anyway enough flattering!

I am nothing special, no better then anyone else, i just like giving a friendly opinion to those who request it.


Vision:
First thing i noticed that this picture was, what was going on? This isn't a bad thing. When i enlarged the picture it showed that it was a planet sitting in space against an amazing backdrop of another galaxy off in the distance or even a cataclysmic event that had recently happen.

Upon closer look of it, i saw a fleet of ships in the asteroid belt in the lower left. It looks as if they are in some sort of encounter, or possibly just flying through a cluster of rocks in space.

The background it self is absolutely amazing. A looming darkness hanging beyond the reach of the world. Something unknown and beautiful, but equally dangerous.

This picture has an amazing balance of bright and dark colors.
For this i am going to give Vision a 5 Stars.

Originality:

I have seen MANY pictures of planetary bodies floating in space, many of which are good, and some that just need to go back to drawing boards.

This picture stands out above and beyond the rest.
I will gives it 5 Stars

Technique:

Your technique shows in the time, the detail, and the aw it creates when one looks at it. I wish i had a sliver of ability that you do, but it takes great time and patients to make are like this, and make it look great. Heres to those with steady hands!

I will give it 5 Stars

Impact:

One of the key things i thought that added to the impact was the name of the piece, i didn't know what Cthonic meant. (Yes rush me to the cross and light me on fire) So i took the time to research it, and felt that the name chosen actually made me stop and go, Wow, i couldn't have chosen a better name.

The thought of a planet in the foreground, the feeling of safety and home.

In the background, like a poisoness flower, its beauty only masks how deadly it truly is.

I give this catagory 5 Stars also
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Overall, most of what i have said has been repeated and repeated. Does that make it bad... well maybe for me as the 'critique'.
I hope you guys like what i have to say, if not, lemme know.

25/25 Stars Keep up the good work!

So first thing i will say is i haven't played the game, i know who fury is but i didn't know what he was. I looked up on google and checked out some of the pictures of him.

The colors used are very good, with the jacket being such a dark color it is usually hard to keep pieces separated, but you have done a good job of that. I can tell where the right hip leaves, then the tubing, then his arm.

I was confused with the reflections on the helmet, the image i looked at showed me clouds and other aerial bodies, after seeing that if made a bit more sense.

The jetpack arms and nozzles are lacking a little detail, some of the edges behind 'The Fury' can be smoothed out, and other areas can be cleaned up also.
I can see where the focus was though, and that is the body.

Great work with the clothing, all of it looks great.
Shading and all that is an A+
Vision: I don't know what that means, so i said 4
Originality: The pose is the same as most pictures i found, and he isn't an 'original' character but i gave that a 4 also.
Technique: You did a great job with the drawing/painting of this picture, i gave it a 4.5
Impact: Another term that means nothing to me, It made me want to critique, if that means anything. 4.5

Overall i would say this is a strong 4.0 picture, 5 are for perfection, and to me in the art world there isn't any perfection!

Your very welcome! All artists, who put that much time into it!

Not much more can be said!