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Still requesting critiques and no one wants to talk to aswer you ...

Good things first
This pict is great, finnaly you learned how to draw lips, that pumpkin is cool too, I like that shiny effect and That monster in front makes me wonder what will happen next


But her eyes are too big, boobs have stange shape, hairs could be better, background is too dark and pumkin need 3d effect - mouth is good but that eyes are really bad...

So its B-
Dont get me wrong, I like your art, but this isnt your best artwork
Keep practissing you will become good artist
The Artist thought this was FAIR
3 out of 3 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconvilliawenn:
Villiawenn Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's fair, but also pretty harsh critique - eyes are kinda in manga style and they looks big just because the nose, which looks ridiculous. OK, noses are hard to draw. And the boobies have that shape just because they're big as hell and randomly laying on the pumpkin. Did you ever saw some hentai (if you're 18 years +)? In this stuff they have more weird shapes in similar situations ;) . I also think, that the pumpkin is cute as it is.
With the other stuff I agreed :D
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:icontmnwag:
TMNwag Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2016
WTF... Im writing my opinion, do you have problem with that?
I dont wanna be rude, but this critique is for Ro4le not you...
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Villiawenn Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, chill out, it wasn't mean like offense or something, I just write my opinion on your critique
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