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TiSCeadesHandyMan by tisbore TiSCeadesHandyMan by tisbore
I was just practicing panels and did this for kicks.


Yeah, some panels aren't straight, I kept them that way to show my lameness. ALSO, sharpie markers for inking, suck. =|

Crits welcomed.


Ceade belongs to me.
Fence belongs to :iconbelazuur:
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Pandachu Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009  Student Filmographer
I thought they weren't straight on purpose... xD
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Belazuur Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2009
He's like a big kid. "hey Fence, hey, hey Fence listen"

As you said some of the panels aren't completely straight but it isn't really noticable so I wouldn't worry about it..
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tisbore Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009
yeah, ceade is a bit immature, but can get serious, quick. like me... o,o...
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:iconteachmemogster:
TeachMeMogster Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2009
Hey, this is pretty damn awesome!

Oh, that reminds me, I need to make a bandit for your guild thingy....

:iconnojoyplz: HOW COULD I FORGET?!

But seriously, this is really good! Don't sell yourself so short on your ability to do panelling. You're really good at it! GROW SOME EGO!

Though, since we're all here; if you wanted to make it more epic or something I would add some panels at the top with just some details of Fence's lab before the zoom-out picture of him working, and have Ceade's yelling "Fence? You there?" in some speech bubbles while showing the lab or somesuch. That'd add to the setting and put a little more suspense on it.

But that's just theoretical of course; too much work for a little comic like this.

I especially love that first panel. The use of black and white is spectacular.
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tisbore Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009
aww thanks.. =D
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TeachMeMogster Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009
You're welcome!
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