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Laura Marie In The Shower...

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ModelΒ Β Laura MarieObjectΒ Β ShowerObjectΒ Β Water DropsLocationΒ Β My Shower

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Laura Marie @lauuramarie 
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Hi.

I'm not a terrible fan of this photograph. I like vignetting, use it heavily myself, but it looks strange in the area between her legs and up her right leg. There is a virtual\digital outline around her legs and along her right cheek (face). I also hate to say that this image is not very flattering to the model. I don't know what the focal length is (looks like you might have been in the shower?) but her upper body is large then the effect of wide angle kicks in and her lower body looks dwarfed in comparison. I understand the sexy pose by arching her back, but unfortunately it has made her right leg really distorted and the way the left leg is framed\cut off at it's thickest point adds to the general distortion of her lower body. This is crazy but i kind of see the front of a centaur. That's also a lot of make-up for the shower. The floor looks like cheap linoleum that you'd see at a school.

What I like is the lighting on her face and the way you were able to capture the water, although it feels like cold water when I look at this image, she almost appears to have goosebumps.

You do very nice work, I just don't think this is one of your strongest images.