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Yellow Drapery by timmi-o-tool

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not happy with this...
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Silvel Featured By Owner May 19, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
I love the concept in the characters and poses etc. But I agree it's not good! Redo it seriously it has potential I feel!
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Alternate-Deviant Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2009  Student Photographer
What exactly makes you unhappy with it?
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timmi-o-tool Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2009
i think there is not really an "atmosphere" in it...
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SmoteyMote Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2009  Student Digital Artist
You may not be happy but I am.

I think it looks more like a rough concept sketch though than a finished piece

I'm going to agree with VPellen above because you don't need to hear me repeat it.
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timmi-o-tool Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2009
it's not supposed to be finished. it would be wasting of time to finish this...
thank you for commmenting :D
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SmoteyMote Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Ahaha I know that, I was just saying the impression that it gave was a concept sketch. :P

You're welcome.
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VPellen Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd give you critique, but I'm not 100% sure what you were going for.

Technically, I like it, if only because it's far better than anything else I could have done, but that tends to suggest that if I could do something like that, I wouldn't like it. Hmm.

If there's a mood you're trying to establish here, it isn't working; From the weird mask and the.. doll? I'm going to assume you were going for some creepy surreal thing. I think the main issue is that nothing really grabs my attention. I'm not even quite sure what's going on. She reminds me of Sabrina from Pokemon, so I want to say she's some creepy psychic chick thing, but..

It's good, but the concept needs work. Sorry, I'd love to give you more than that, but it's hard when I'm unsure what you were going for.
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timmi-o-tool Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2009
thanks you for your crit dude!
i really appreciate it.
i think this is my main issue atm to build up shitty compositions with no attention point :/ practicing should fix this (i hope)... the creep in the front is supposed to be a slave of her or something.
i'll try to do it better the next time!
hope to read more critique from you, thanks again!
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