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Beach Episode by timmi-o-tool

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Little comic style picture to get my head clear.
I should've checked the composition of the values beforehand.
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Koruza Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
"I should've checked the composition of the values beforehand."
Um how do you usually check that? And what do you think is wrong with it?
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timmi-o-tool Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
You can check it if you put in your sketch the basic values of the main objects of the scene to get everything balanced well.
I didn't do it, so the brazier and the girl in the dark swimsuit are distracting the viewflow too much, so your eye could be confused by it.
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Koruza Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
I see i think i understand what you mean, so the solution would be to brighten the swimsuit and lowering the value and contrast of the brazier.
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timmi-o-tool Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012
yes, for example.
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theBlackDeath Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Honestly the biggest thing that looks off to me is the anatomy of the girl in the single-piece. her torso is very elongated and straight while falling/jumping in a very unnatural way even for a stylized drawing.

I think if you flip this photo you'd have a good reference for that perspective/view point.
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Googling "volleyball saves" brings up a lot of good results.
Nice work, you did a good job rendering the water, which is a very difficult thing to do.
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timmi-o-tool Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012
Oh you're right thanks. Didn't notice the proportions from that angle.
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theBlackDeath Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
No problem, man. I've played volley ball before so it stuck out to me 'cause I'm familiar with the motions.
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KlausReinbachIII Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
Weiß gar net was du hast XD, das Essen macht aufjedenfall hungrig!
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timmi-o-tool Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
Oh da fällt mir auf der eine Spieß geht garnicht bis zum Bildrand^^°
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telohs Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
hehe, yeh, composition is a bit weird, but it's cool. Liking the saturated colors. Cool style
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timmi-o-tool Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
Thanks!
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