I see that as a good tip. Those idiots of Fifty Shades don't know a good critic when they see one.
Agreed. Honestly before I was kinda a 'yes man' but until I met you I changed a lot and improved on my characters. I don't know where I'd be if it wasn't for you and Wing.
I think you pointing things out that won't work and giving advice on how things can be improve is a lot of help. I know if it wasn't for you I would still have certain problems in my fanfics that honestly did need to be fixed or even scrapped due to how badly it crashed.