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I know in some way the MCF still lives on through others, but the Evil Tracy arc, despite being the nail in the coffin, fascinated me in hindsight.

i think one of the issues was that Light wasn't that much of a threat and even when he was out in the open, those who could defeat him didn't even try. Tracy was made smarter to make the others dumb.

now I didn't bring this up to :iconmagicalalchemist17: or :iconangelthewingedcat: as their OCs played major roles but here is what I was going to propose to them before I eventually suggested a treasure hunt for the Death Notes after Ryuk took them away to spice up the game:

1. Light kill off a few villains. Now initially, with Hazama it would be impossible but certain other villains like the small cartoony ones wouldn't exactly be hard to accomplish .

2. Halloween Town found and brunt to the ground. The reason I suggested this was because Wing as a character had ALL the advantages the rest of the KCF didn't: Light didn't know her name (even though he could easily just look as a picture of her), she had magic (willing to kill) and a safe place to hide. Everything the MCF didn't. But here is also where the plot hole stands: Homura Akemi was a friend of wings and given her power alongside Saber and Ragna, there shouldn't have been any problem, that and a creature scared Ryuk into not telling Light to kill wing. It lessened Lights threat and made the characters with her  even more stupid when he had little to no bodyguards.


Which brings me to..

3. Better bodyguards for Light. I don't think Paulina from. Danny Phantom would be great bodyguard and being king of the shimigami just literally went nowhere. At all. Now in the case of the enemies Light had, it'd make more sense to have bodyguards such as Gilgamesh and some magical followers of Kira.

4.  Have the MCF ...well...give up on certain cartoons. Given how dark the arc was meant to be, cartoons such as MLp would be unfitting. If anything, the MCF were humnanverisins and..it didn't work; they should have been maturing , not singing and dancing. Plus with the very heavy implication that eveyrine in cartoon town were Kira supporters, it makes you question why they stood around.

5. ...Light trained by Ras? Bare with me, the League of Asassins are committed to bringing order and justice to the world; Light is the perfect candidate. Imagine if he came back, no longer reliant on the Death Note and trained under the League, he would be able to expand his justice through the League.

but we got what we got and honestly, some of these ideas serve as inspiration for the direction I'm taking Light in my stories.

so it's not a big loss.

i should have,spoken up.

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angelthewingedcat Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017
Honestly you do bring up a lot of good points and yeah, there was a lot of problems, including with stuff with my own oc. Through I do admit, some of the things you said like Light trained with Ras...that honestly sounds like a good idea. Thinking back, I do wish I handled things a lot different than what I did and I hope I don't make the same mistakes again for any future stories.
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 2, 2017
Well, upon reflection really, I think it was becasue wing was so shrouded in mystery AND having Hannah threaten Ryuk, it just didn't feel right. It didn't feel like she was really suffering from Light's return; what was planned for Eye of Snake was just Hazama. Halloween Town burning down not only would have had Light realise that more monsters exist but inspire him to control them and have a emotional consequence of Wing outside her releaisng that her name isn't actually her name (which didn't really add a lot) . Light rained by Ras would have helped him slowly get to know Wing, Saber and Ragna more.

really my advice; don't make Wing so shrouded in mystery to the point where she seems like the most mature one, which isn't exactly the characterisation people got from Wing. MCF wing just felt too jarringly different
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angelthewingedcat Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017
Trust me, with the changes being made to Wing I'm hoping that doesn't happen again.:nod: And yeah, I agree with MCF Wing: I really should have been handled differently with how she acted.
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017
Okay :) I think the biggest iusse was Homura herself but given how she's not really a sister now, there's that. but yeah..least we're learning.
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MagicalAlchemist17 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
That...would have worked honestly. Granted looking back, using Paulina as a friend to Shirona was just plain dumb of me, especially when she was practically a one -dimensional sterotypical bully in Danny Phantom, basically useless. I could say the same thing for Adele. Someone like Gilgamesh would've worked better. 

Honestly, I still look back and think of better ideas for the story. Despite the general idea being pretty much defunct, a part of me still leans onto it somewhat. After all, it was what gave me the push to improve more on my writing when you look at it. I know it didn't work, but I just like to think at times...'what if'?

I am very much curious with the direction you're taking Light in though. :)
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017
Wait..now I mention it...the MCF hideout was still out there right? Why didn't Light touch it?
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MagicalAlchemist17 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not actually sure if the thought ever came across I honestly don't know why I never mentioned that and I should have probably done something about that  ^^;
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017
I think the issue was Supernatural and Frienship Games.
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MagicalAlchemist17 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you might be right ^^; 
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017
The teargas scene was out of supernatural.

that and the dark knight trilogy. 

Homestly it was down to Light somehow buried in cartoon down or something. I don't get how he was ressjrectted.


but yeah..we are learning and if we ever do return of Kira for our universe, we know what not to do 
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MagicalAlchemist17 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah ^^; I've a lot of what not to do if the concept is ever revived again
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TimeBoy08 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 2, 2017
Well to be honest it wasn't just you, it was meant to be a joint thing. Sis said no to Halloween town burning down so really to me that was when i was noticing how unfair it seemed. no one was willing to allow Loght to kill. And honestly Jessy's idea of her asking Tracy to kill her just seemed like a completely different scene from a different show because of how different it was tone wise and character established wise.

and yeah..I can see why...
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