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Him...

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Him...

looking at him
my heart swells,
still.
I can't remember
the me without him,
sighs.
I worry as I watch him
he seems so tired, yet
laughing.
he taunts my frown
"I Am Iron Man...."
I laugh too and am comforted
but only just.
I have loved "Him" since I was sixteen years old, enough said.
© 2007 - 2021 time-warrior
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tearsunheard's avatar

I'm surprised I haven't commented on this 00
Awesome job : D
So sweet.
time-warrior's avatar
Thank you so very much. :D
I like this one too. :nod:
Twin-Kamon's avatar
That's a great poem. :aww:
time-warrior's avatar
:aww: Thank you, I'm glad you think so.

This poem might not be as universal as it should be, but I hope that all who aspire to love and be loved can be as happy. :)
Twin-Kamon's avatar
I found it pretty universal myself, and yes I hope so too. :)
Shiroi-Tombo's avatar
Aww!:aww: I know just how you feel:D
time-warrior's avatar
:aww: Then you must be very happy and have much love in your life :nod:

Thank you for the sweet comment. :)
Shiroi-Tombo's avatar
:nod: Yup:D
You're welcome:D
Jennie-Wolf's avatar
Aww, how sweet. :aww:
time-warrior's avatar
Thank you very much. :)
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