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Broken Heart

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never so clean the break,
that hooks fail to remind ....

   how much there was.
could of beens ...
lost,

shattered
in the never had the chance.

~psC~

(TW )

TW :peace:

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blessed-saen's avatar
nice work my friend, well versed.
time-warrior's avatar
:aww: I appreciate ya! Thank you so much for reading my work. :hug:

TW :peace:
Blueskye27's avatar
Love those first two lines; you capture it so perfectly. Nice work.
time-warrior's avatar
:glomp: Thank you, Cindy, that means a lot to me. How have you been? Well I hope. :nod:

:dance:

TW :peace:
Blueskye27's avatar
Hi, Peggy. It's been a hard summer, but I think the worst is over now. I'm just...tired. But I've been missing my friends here at dA, so I'm trying to catch up a little. Sorry I've been gone so long. How are you? :hug:
balthasarcraft's avatar
Sometimes I think bits of our souls chink off when we separate from people suddenly, and stick to them, and bits of them stick to us, and remind us constantly of them hole they left.
time-warrior's avatar
I agree wholeheartedly, it's so hard to release the heart from something that has meant so much to us ... each person in our lives is unique and the attachment is the same, no one else would fit it.

Thank you so much for your kind insightful comment. ^^

TW :peace:
balthasarcraft's avatar
I totally agree; every person and every relationship is irreplaceable.
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