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Dreamscape
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Dreams are swirling in my head
As I'm laying down to bed
Thoughts profound and thoughts mundane
A vision of a weather vane
Sleep Creeps up while I'm awake
And in the dark my dreams will take
A turn, likewise, towards the black
I've rowed out far, no turning back
Faces, faces, everywhere
All my own but with pink hair
Each of my many faces sings
And floats about on silvered wings
Running now, I pump each foot
But soon I start to cough up soot
All around the fires burn
I stand aghast and slowly turn
In my bed; it's now a mess
But solemly I must confess
On my sheets I see ghost flames
I'm rather sleepy, all the same
As I'm laying down to bed
Thoughts profound and thoughts mundane
A vision of a weather vane
Sleep Creeps up while I'm awake
And in the dark my dreams will take
A turn, likewise, towards the black
I've rowed out far, no turning back
Faces, faces, everywhere
All my own but with pink hair
Each of my many faces sings
And floats about on silvered wings
Running now, I pump each foot
But soon I start to cough up soot
All around the fires burn
I stand aghast and slowly turn
In my bed; it's now a mess
But solemly I must confess
On my sheets I see ghost flames
I'm rather sleepy, all the same
Tell me what you think 
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I like the imagery here. And the rhyming. There are a couple lines that don't fit though. The words are fine, but the rhythm stumbles in a few places. Also, did you mean to capitalize "Creeps" in the second stanza.