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Dismantled Innocence-03-nsfw

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By Thurosis   |   
Mature  |  Published: May 4, 2018
© 2018 - 2020 Thurosis
Here is the next volume of Dismantled Innocence!

It contains 36 pages instead of the usual 24 pages
Bonus Material are the Story Board
and Illustrations of Astella and naughty version of Ayaka (My OC)

Story:
It continues at the last Event, where Astella found the hideout of those freaks who damaged her former body...
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glammazon's avatar
How do I turn the page?
ViolentVirgil's avatar
Question, if we do the $10 Patreon package, does that mean we get this volume and the previous ones?
schwarzewolf's avatar
I love this series When is the next coming?
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ThurosisHobbyist Artist
i currently have some big trouble within the family... so it's going to be delayed a bit....
but i have written down the story
dsl2000's avatar
This bot is really cute. 

But I feel like 10 pages on the torture scene is way too short, at this length it really should be 3 or more episodes on the torture alone.

This is common across the entire series.
The focus of your work is on the dismantling of these bots and that is what I would like to see more. Sorry to be blunt, but the story is meh.

<2B in trouble> was just long enough and that had around 30 pages over 3 parts, even that could have been a lot more...

I got excited when I saw the increase in page number on this one, but was slightly disappointed at the end.

Still, nice work, I enjoyed the good parts. 
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thank you, i will keep this info in my mind ^o^
And you are right i should have reduced the information part
and increased the number of Mekabare pages.
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ThurosisHobbyist Artist
thank you ^^
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ThurosisHobbyist Artist
thanks a lot, if you are one of the readers, please tell me your opinion ^^
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Where can i find it?  The manga?  
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ThurosisHobbyist Artist
It's a premium content.
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ThurosisHobbyist Artist
sorry ^^;
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