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Rivals of Love

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[Opening narration / description]
Ever since the first day Maua set her paws in the Pride Lands, Mzuri had never been fond of her — the freak with two different-colored eyes.
To Mzuri, a lioness dabbling in healing herbs was just wrong. Healing was a job for mandrills — everyone knew that. Every Royal Mjuzi in memory, from Rafiki to Makini, had been a mandrill and no other animal.

Lionesses, as her mother Zuri always said, were meant to hunt, feed the pride, and care for the cubs — not mix potions or talk to flowers. And Mzuri was determined to remind Maua of her “proper place.”


[Scene opens]
Shujaa is seen in the distance saying goodbye to Maua, a soft nuzzle before he heads off for Junior Guard duty. Maua watches him go, smiling faintly before turning back to her work at the water’s edge. She lowers her head to drink from the murky pool, then studies a patch of green herbs beside it.


[Mzuri’s voice calls out off-screen]

Mzuri: (cheerful, fake tone) “Hello, Maua! Fine weather we’re having in the Pride Lands today, eh?”


[Maua’s ears twitch in annoyance, but she doesn’t turn around. She exhales sharply and rolls her heterochromic eyes — one green, one amber.]


[Narration / stage direction]
Maua had been warned more than once by both Chiku and Uzani to watch out for the troublesome sisters who liked to stir up drama. Now she was seeing exactly what they meant.


[Maua turns around, wearing a polite but tight-lipped smile.]

Maua: (measured, trying to be civil) “Hello... Mzuri. Yes, it’s a fine day. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I have a lot of touring to do.”


Mzuri: (stepping closer, tail flicking) “Would you like a personal guide? I could show you all the best places to hang out!”


Maua: “No, thank you, Mzuri. I can manage just fine on—”


Mzuri: (interrupting, smug) “Nonsense! It wouldn’t be any trouble at all for me to show you around my homeland!”


[Narration / stage direction]
That was it. Maua’s patience, already thinning, finally began to snap.


Maua: (sharply) “I’m really not up for a personal guide, Mzuri! If I wanted one, I’d ask for it myself! Now excuse me.”


[Maua brushes past her, shoulders stiff. Her paws quicken as she breaks into a run, putting distance between herself and the aggravating cub before she says something she’d regret.]


[Mzuri watches her go, a smirk curling across her muzzle.]


Mzuri: (to herself, scoffing) “Coward. If she’s that easy to rattle, it won’t be long before Shujaa realizes what a little freak she really is... and then he’ll be mine.


[Camera pans to the reeds as Mzuri’s smug laughter fades into the breeze. The swamp ripples. Scene fades out.]


Bases I used today are both created by @Through-the-movies  Rani Base 14(Request) Base Zuri

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AliciaTheSalukiGal06's avatar

Man,words cannot describe how much i hate Mzuri