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A Loud at the Hotel Chapter 10 by ThunderD007, literature

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A Loud at the Hotel Chapter 9 by ThunderD007, literature

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I know it’s a little early, though now that season 2 is over, I have one question about the second arc going forward. Throughout the season 2 arc, could there be a point in Lincoln’s arc where it’s focused more on his curse affecting him like ALAD, where he’s slowly turning into a demon the more he spends time in hell, and it gets to the point where he gets psychically and mentally unstable? And if it is, is there a point where both Charlie and Vox played a role in making Lincoln’s mental and psychical state worse and the tensions at the hotel in “silenced” is the breaking point where Lincoln descends into madness and the hotel staff neglected to notice what’s happening wrong until it’s too late, not to mention the Vees enabling his demonic corruption to further corrupt him? And would’ve succeeded in Lincoln descending into evil were it not for the staff, the I.M.P or whoever in the hellaverse getting him to snap out of it?

Only asking because I believe it would be a great character arc for Lincoln when it comes to displaying the effects of Lincoln’s curse since, he’s cursed in literal hell. Plus, it would be great raise the stakes for Charlie when it comes to the boy, since it’s bad enough that Vox outwitted her and she nearly drove Lucifer and to an extent Vaggie away (not to mention if some of her mistakes almost got linky killed), what could happen to Lincoln could raise the stakes as hers and Vox’a actions could have devastating consequences.

Hey when you eventually get to season 2 can you maybe curb some of the dumber decisions the characters make in canon, I think you know the ones? They just get frustrating is all.

Don't worry, I plan to make some major changes in the season 2 adaption especially when it comes to the choices the characters made in the canon series.

How do you think Lincoln would react when he learns that Abel is Adam's son?

In the lastest chapter, Lincoln did mention Abel to Adam.

So while he'll be surprise to see him in person, he'll be happy to know that Abel isn't like Adam.

Heard you've been helping someone come up with ideas to help my story. Thanks.

I have a funny suggestion for A Loud at the Hotel season 2, what if Lincoln finally snaps due to the sinners’ obnoxious attitude and having a raging breakdown.


Lincoln: (screams) WITHOUT THE HAZBIN HOTEL, NONE OF YOU WOULD EXIST!!!!