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Timmy the Reaper



                 Created by Tyler Gates  





Warning: This written series is overly ridiculous and may cause some readers to go "wtf". Oh, it also has some nasty themes and gore n' stuff too.





"Doomdation"



(o.o) As in like this being the first chapter is like the 'foundation' of 'doom', get it, get it? I crack myself up :P





    Hot water rushes from the tap, creating more steam and fogging up the bathroom as the young Lylah relaxes deep within the tub after a long day of work as a dog's nail-stylist. Soaking in the lovely mass of H2O, she slightly smiles in total bliss – life couldn't be better.



    The water then quickly becomes dyed as if were now black ink, bubbling with acidity as her flesh rapidly melts away from her bones. Her intestines oozing out into the blackness, slowly swirling around like a mini-whirlpool as a gruesome and absolutely terrifying creature emerges, a true incarnation of death – a small mopey-boy blinks at her. [(o.o) ignore the fact that she should already be dead :P] Lylah screams in horror, causing the small pale boy to cover his small pale ears with his small pale hands hidden under his small (but not pale. HA!) black hood and robes.



    "WHO ARE YOU!?" She screams at the top of her slowly melting away-lungs.



     The boy blinks, uncovering his ears as he sighs, "I'm, I'm just Timmy…,"he then moves his hands into his robes, rummaging around for something. Tears forming in her eyes, Lylah manages to calm herself down [(o.o) it's a wonder how she could considering her current circumstance] and then sniffles, "What, what a-are you doing?"



     The boy looks at her tilting his head to the side slightly, finally getting hold of what he was looking for as he reveals a giant black scythe with a shimmering silver blade. An incredibly childish voice echoes out from the weapon, "YAY!~ I get to kill things~"



     Lylah screams again, leaving Timmy to sigh heavily while the scythe cringes, "OWOWOWOW! Timmy she's attacking us with banshee powers!" The screaming is halted when black tentacles swiftly burst from the dark water, entangling and constricting the remains of her body, and wrapping around her mouth, keeping it crushed shut. [(o.o)I know what you're thinking………tentacle porn] Lylah whimpers as the small Timmy approaches her through the bath, "To clear up any confusion let me explain. I am Timmy, I may look like a small 7-year-old but I'm way, way older than that since I'm a Reaper, or Death Incarnate, whatever. Now, you have been 'Named', and so I have to kill you, since I'm a Reaper, simple really. You understand?" The tentacles vanish into mist, allowing her to respond while she looks directly into Timmy's eyes of melancholy.



     She then slightly shrugs, "……Ummmmmmmmmmmm…….no?" Within an instant her head is sent thudding against a wall with a swing from Timmy's scythe, it rattling in the glory of the moment, "YAY! I'm dirty~ I wanna be more dirty, hurry n' do the change thingy!" It says with impatience.



      Timmy soon pulls out a small bottle made of tiny gremlin skulls from his robe, tipping a bit of its oozing-white contents [(o.o) *giggles*] onto the bathroom floor, making the room glow bright red while it warps and moulds. Timmy then looks around at what now appears to be the scene of a terrible accident, with Lylah's corpse (now with a head attached) situated on the floor, appearing as though she has tripped over the tub and hit the ground and died. Timmy then rests his bloodied-scythe over his shoulder, disappearing into a newly-formed abyss vortex while whistling Don't Fear the Reaper by Blue Oyster Cult.



To be disembodied...


AUDITIONS ARE BEING HELD FOR THE TIMMY THE REAPER ANIMATION ->news.deviantart.com/article/15…
The first chapter in the Timmy the reaper series 1 of 30 chapters.


For all the chapters and some amazing dark/supernatural art visit :icontimmythereaper:

Chapter 2 [link]
Chapter 1 <- You are here

Reaper feedback questions[link]

For a list of up and coming contests visit [link]

Comments are welcome :D
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:iconrahula87:
Rahula87 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really nice and interesting story :D
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Atticus-Morwing Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Hmm...I should've read this earlier.
Pretty good stuff, gonna read through everything.
Besides, it'll make participating in the contest much more fun,
if I can create a really related Reaper.
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Immaculus Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Professional Writer
The more you read will mean the better you understand the 'Timmyverse' lore, which would allow you to ceate a character closer to canon. That in itself would be an advantage in this contest ;)(By the way, the editing time for these chapters was short so there are plenty grammatical errors haha)
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Atticus-Morwing Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Student General Artist
True.
Also, I don't really mind that (=typos) much, as long as the story in itself will be interesting.
We'll see~
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Professional Writer
and has been interesting for you?
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:iconatticus-morwing:
Atticus-Morwing Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Student General Artist
So far, yes. Wish I had more time to read tho.
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LightLoveAngel Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahah :D i like it, however the little artists comments in it are distracting, BUT it adds to the silliness :p
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Professional Writer
Yeah, I've gotten a lot of feedback saying the same thing. It's too late to change now, since the series is over. But I will keep it in mind for later projects. :D
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LightLoveAngel Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe, alright :]
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Acellan Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
well then, its not every day the reaper comes and melts the flesh from your bones ^+^
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Suzy-Ane Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm laughing hysterically right now.
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I prolly shouldn't have said that.:ohnoes:
OHWELLZIES :XD:
Not because it's bad. :iconohnoesplz:
Becauseilavit.:iconilavplz:
Amd teh notes you stuffehd in it. :meow:
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Professional Writer
thanks :)
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Chezzy-Am Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:rofl: this has got to be the most admirably silly and addictive piece of dA literature I have read in a long time. and the author comments were top knotch hahaha you sir deserve :jarkinajar: because I can't afford cookies, :llama:, points and frankly jark would be happy to play with Timmy... hahahah timmy is soo cute and awkward :lol: :clap: good work :)
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Professional Writer
thanks hope you keep reading :)
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Chezzy-Am Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah I read part 2. Hilarious :rofl:
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AmbigiousNothing Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011   Digital Artist
>w< so much love for this~ <3
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2011  Professional Writer
^.^ thankies
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cheeriosbdr529 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Student General Artist
OMG LOLOOLLLLLLLL
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Trezykx Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You have an ...odd style? odd enough to make reading your odd story interesting. but it really has a B' rate movie style to it. Which brings me back to the classic 80's horrors, they were all B's and made a much bigger impression on viewers than all of the C-G crap of today could ever hope to.
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011  Professional Writer
haha, I'm in total agreeance with you :D and yeah this series was one of my more 'unconventional' pieces of work, and hey, that's what it's all about :)
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FallenAngelKokoro Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is fairly interesting :3 a bit short but very interesting and straight to the point as well XD
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Professional Writer
haha the first chapter was written short because it was originally just to see how people resonded to the series. No point goin over the top if no one liked it xD
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FallenAngelKokoro Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah true~
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AzeeraTheNinja Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Student Interface Designer
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The goal of #PennedPaper is to provide exposure to the under-appreciated writers of dA and to provide feedback on all works submitted to us. For this reason we do not accept deviations already found in six or more other group galleries at the time of submission to us. This is not an attack on the artist and has nothing to do with the quality of the deviation. For this reason, your work has been declined. For more information please read this news article [link]

You are welcome to submit other pieces found in less than six other group galleries to us.

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Devilish-Motives Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AH! XD That made me laugh XD I like his scythe XD "YAY, I'M DIRTY!!!" XD
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Professional Writer
:P haha, yep good ol' Scythe.
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:iconicy7:
icy7 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Timmy's badass :D
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Professional Writer
indeed he is :D
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mirosango14 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
very cool concept! I'm assuming you've read Soul Eater? this reminds me A LOT of Soul Eater...
some constructive criticism:
1. if you have something to say about your story, you should say it in artist comments. not in the middle of the story. it breaks the concentration of the reader, and it doesn't look that professional, especially when you have a place to put all those comments (unlike fanfiction/fictionpress.net).
2. paragraphs are groups of sentences that are about one subject. two people talking in the same paragraph is a HUGE no-no, as it can confuse the reader. plus, short paragraphs are easier to read! (you can however get away with this by not putting someone's speech in quotation marks. for example: "Hey," I shouted to my friend Erica, "Did you by any chance locate my cloud bugs? I need to stop a drought in Utah, but I can't find them anywhere!" Erica groaned and informed me, for the billionth time, that she had no idea where my cloud bugs were, and I should just stop asking her before she caused my head to explode.)
hope I helped! ;)
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Immaculus Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Professional Writer
actually, the most I've seen of Soul Eater is a 2 min clip that I saw after this series was written. Any similarities I'd base on the fact that a talking weapon/scythe and reaper-themed story are not incredibly original for a series, but that wasn't an issue for me really since it wasn't so much the theme I wanted to make original but more so how it was structured. And I should clarify that this series (which has finished on other sites but not on dA yet, with 30 chapters) was written when I had not studied paragraphs and dialogue, though it improves later in the series when I had looked at it more thoroughly. The "(o.o)" comments are by no means designed to make this look professional, and in fact my goal was the opposite. This series, as you later realise more, is non-sequitur, illogical and random at times with a mix of black comedy. But, as I have stressed before to ppl who have said the same...don't look at the comments as add-ons by me, that (o.o) is no less a character than say Timmy, just because they don't interact doesn't mean any different. This comments are part of the story, they just act in parallel and are made to break the fourth wall to the reader to give a greater experience. Changing their position would ruin the whole point of them, and too many like them just as much as those who find them distracting to alter them, if you see my point?
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mirosango14 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
aha I haven't seen/read that much of Soul Eater either. :XD:
well I'm glad your grammar improves later (I'm a bit of a Grammar Nazi, although not as much as some people :D ) and WOAH! looks like you really know how to defend your ideas! I did enjoy the (o.o) commentary, and if you're not going for professionalism, then they're fine by me.
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Immaculus Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011  Professional Writer
haha, I don't consider it defending so much as it is explaining :P but I am glad you commented :D hope you read on and enjoy the other chapters and the many more that are yet to be posted :)
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mom1995577 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011   Artist
the syth made me laugh! haha!
i think this is a very intresting story. and i did NOT go 'wtf'....lol
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andrewhurleys Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
huh. interesting, I like your inputs like "(ignore the fact that she should already be dead)" I chuckled at those, good job :thumbsup: :D
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks :D
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andrewhurleys Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem (:
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ozu95supein Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011
O-o, 0-0'o,, O O
4 & {this is supposed to be sweat}
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interestingly disturbing
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011  Professional Writer
I see o.o
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PuzzledHeartBox Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011
LOL, Timmy is awesome.
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2011  Professional Writer
haha I tend to agree xP
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emilymz Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing :D
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks :D
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emilymz Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
no probs ^^;
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LittlexEmoxGirl Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011
This made my day...
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Professional Writer
^.^ glad to hear it (or read it...you know what I mean :P)
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Nightreign123 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Student Writer
ya know I have only one thing to say to this... WTF?!
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:iconimmaculus:
Immaculus Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2011  Professional Writer
:D lols
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dotafunky Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha it made me laugh for some messed up reason :P

thank you for joining my group, by the way ;)
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Third-rate Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Student General Artist
It's cool :) and yay haha
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Manwraith91 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
Gotta admit, I would not have ever bothered looking at this if it didn't have that catchy 'Doomdation' picture title
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