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TtR:Chapter 1 Doomdation

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Timmy the Reaper



                 Created by Tyler Gates  





Warning: This written series is overly ridiculous and may cause some readers to go "wtf". Oh, it also has some nasty themes and gore n' stuff too.





"Doomdation"



(o.o) As in like this being the first chapter is like the 'foundation' of 'doom', get it, get it? I crack myself up :P





    Hot water rushes from the tap, creating more steam and fogging up the bathroom as the young Lylah relaxes deep within the tub after a long day of work as a dog's nail-stylist. Soaking in the lovely mass of H2O, she slightly smiles in total bliss – life couldn't be better.



    The water then quickly becomes dyed as if were now black ink, bubbling with acidity as her flesh rapidly melts away from her bones. Her intestines oozing out into the blackness, slowly swirling around like a mini-whirlpool as a gruesome and absolutely terrifying creature emerges, a true incarnation of death – a small mopey-boy blinks at her. [(o.o) ignore the fact that she should already be dead :P] Lylah screams in horror, causing the small pale boy to cover his small pale ears with his small pale hands hidden under his small (but not pale. HA!) black hood and robes.



    "WHO ARE YOU!?" She screams at the top of her slowly melting away-lungs.



     The boy blinks, uncovering his ears as he sighs, "I'm, I'm just Timmy…,"he then moves his hands into his robes, rummaging around for something. Tears forming in her eyes, Lylah manages to calm herself down [(o.o) it's a wonder how she could considering her current circumstance] and then sniffles, "What, what a-are you doing?"



     The boy looks at her tilting his head to the side slightly, finally getting hold of what he was looking for as he reveals a giant black scythe with a shimmering silver blade. An incredibly childish voice echoes out from the weapon, "YAY!~ I get to kill things~"



     Lylah screams again, leaving Timmy to sigh heavily while the scythe cringes, "OWOWOWOW! Timmy she's attacking us with banshee powers!" The screaming is halted when black tentacles swiftly burst from the dark water, entangling and constricting the remains of her body, and wrapping around her mouth, keeping it crushed shut. [(o.o)I know what you're thinking………tentacle porn] Lylah whimpers as the small Timmy approaches her through the bath, "To clear up any confusion let me explain. I am Timmy, I may look like a small 7-year-old but I'm way, way older than that since I'm a Reaper, or Death Incarnate, whatever. Now, you have been 'Named', and so I have to kill you, since I'm a Reaper, simple really. You understand?" The tentacles vanish into mist, allowing her to respond while she looks directly into Timmy's eyes of melancholy.



     She then slightly shrugs, "……Ummmmmmmmmmmm…….no?" Within an instant her head is sent thudding against a wall with a swing from Timmy's scythe, it rattling in the glory of the moment, "YAY! I'm dirty~ I wanna be more dirty, hurry n' do the change thingy!" It says with impatience.



      Timmy soon pulls out a small bottle made of tiny gremlin skulls from his robe, tipping a bit of its oozing-white contents [(o.o) *giggles*] onto the bathroom floor, making the room glow bright red while it warps and moulds. Timmy then looks around at what now appears to be the scene of a terrible accident, with Lylah's corpse (now with a head attached) situated on the floor, appearing as though she has tripped over the tub and hit the ground and died. Timmy then rests his bloodied-scythe over his shoulder, disappearing into a newly-formed abyss vortex while whistling Don't Fear the Reaper by Blue Oyster Cult.



To be disembodied...


AUDITIONS ARE BEING HELD FOR THE TIMMY THE REAPER ANIMATION ->news.deviantart.com/article/15…
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The first chapter in the Timmy the reaper series 1 of 30 chapters.


For all the chapters and some amazing dark/supernatural art visit :icontimmythereaper:

Chapter 2 [link]
Chapter 1 <- You are here

Reaper feedback questions[link]

For a list of up and coming contests visit [link]

Comments are welcome :D
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Rahula87Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really nice and interesting story :D
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Atticus-MorwingStudent General Artist
Hmm...I should've read this earlier.
Pretty good stuff, gonna read through everything.
Besides, it'll make participating in the contest much more fun,
if I can create a really related Reaper.
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ImmaculusProfessional Writer
The more you read will mean the better you understand the 'Timmyverse' lore, which would allow you to ceate a character closer to canon. That in itself would be an advantage in this contest ;)(By the way, the editing time for these chapters was short so there are plenty grammatical errors haha)
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Atticus-MorwingStudent General Artist
True.
Also, I don't really mind that (=typos) much, as long as the story in itself will be interesting.
We'll see~
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ImmaculusProfessional Writer
and has been interesting for you?
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Atticus-MorwingStudent General Artist
So far, yes. Wish I had more time to read tho.
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LightLoveAngelHobbyist Digital Artist
hahah :D i like it, however the little artists comments in it are distracting, BUT it adds to the silliness :p
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ImmaculusProfessional Writer
Yeah, I've gotten a lot of feedback saying the same thing. It's too late to change now, since the series is over. But I will keep it in mind for later projects. :D
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LightLoveAngelHobbyist Digital Artist
hehe, alright :]
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AcellanHobbyist Writer
well then, its not every day the reaper comes and melts the flesh from your bones ^+^
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Suzy-AneStudent General Artist
I'm laughing hysterically right now.
:iconshyblushplz:
I prolly shouldn't have said that.:ohnoes:
OHWELLZIES :XD:
Not because it's bad. :iconohnoesplz:
Becauseilavit.:iconilavplz:
Amd teh notes you stuffehd in it. :meow:
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ImmaculusProfessional Writer
thanks :)
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Chezzy-AmProfessional Writer
:rofl: this has got to be the most admirably silly and addictive piece of dA literature I have read in a long time. and the author comments were top knotch hahaha you sir deserve :jarkinajar: because I can't afford cookies, :llama:, points and frankly jark would be happy to play with Timmy... hahahah timmy is soo cute and awkward :lol: :clap: good work :)
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ImmaculusProfessional Writer
thanks hope you keep reading :)
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Chezzy-AmProfessional Writer
Yeah I read part 2. Hilarious :rofl:
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AmbigiousNothing Digital Artist
>w< so much love for this~ <3
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ImmaculusProfessional Writer
^.^ thankies
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cheeriosbdr529Student General Artist
OMG LOLOOLLLLLLLL
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TrezykxHobbyist Digital Artist
You have an ...odd style? odd enough to make reading your odd story interesting. but it really has a B' rate movie style to it. Which brings me back to the classic 80's horrors, they were all B's and made a much bigger impression on viewers than all of the C-G crap of today could ever hope to.
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ImmaculusProfessional Writer
haha, I'm in total agreeance with you :D and yeah this series was one of my more 'unconventional' pieces of work, and hey, that's what it's all about :)
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FallenAngelKokoroHobbyist Digital Artist
this is fairly interesting :3 a bit short but very interesting and straight to the point as well XD
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ImmaculusProfessional Writer
haha the first chapter was written short because it was originally just to see how people resonded to the series. No point goin over the top if no one liked it xD
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FallenAngelKokoroHobbyist Digital Artist
ah true~
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