I am wearing the exact same kind of shirt Maria is wearing right now, that kind of color explosion shirt.
Very good and nice conveyance of emotion. For what you need to work on, I'd say to work on the wrinkles, folds, and shadows that make something look truly three-dimensional. Like for instance, the way the face folds in around the eyes when the person is really upset can add a lot. Try looking into that kind of thing!
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I'd love to see what the Light Novels eventually do with her. Priestess having a hang-up about visiting her is a loose thread right now, and I have no idea how that loose thread will be tied up. I hope it's great.