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Inferno Adoptable (SOLD) by TheVenomStain Inferno Adoptable (SOLD) by TheVenomStain
she was meant to be a fire elemental, to counter the earth elemental i had designed. but without color, fire is kind of...:shrug:

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zecaa Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ok.. seriously. Stop taking my points. :cry:

And the fire looks pretty darn good I'll have you know! :)

She'd work well in the MD story too. :3
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TheVenomStain Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
hahaha well, thanks for that! :heart:

i'd be happy to know you'd be using them in a story! :love:
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zecaa Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey, no problem. I'm no professional writer (not by a long shot), but I have a soft spot for fantasy adopts especially, since they are so flexible with the genre I tend to read and write for the most. :D
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TheVenomStain Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i write fantasy as well (my main book has been going on for about 6 years now) and i write for the convenience :XD: in fantasy, you are not required to explain how someone does something. it's magic! anything goes! :dummy:
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zecaa Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Although I have read some where the authors have explained how magic works in intrinsic detail, and it still works to suspend disbelief. I guess fantasy allows that suspension throughout the spectrum. I'd love to read some of your writing at some point (doesn't have to be from the book, mind you.) Although I don't to upload much, people tend to enjoy my poetry (which I don't write often) more than my stories. I have some in my gallery if you ever want to check them out. :XD:
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TheVenomStain Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you'll have to send me a link to some of your favorites. as for my work, there actually is a more recent story i've begun writing i'd love to hear your input on.

intro: [link]
part 1: [link]
part 2: [link]
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zecaa Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Alright, I'm going to remind you that I am no professional when it comes to telling what a good story is. Your setting and characters have enough charisma to engage the reader quite well. ^_^ The story has some light-hearted humor that keeps it from taking itself too seriously, which is good! The plot seems a little loose at the moment, but that it is going to get going in the next few chapters right away. :D

However, I see you are guilty of the one thing so many authors are guilty of. Commas are not to be used so commonly. I'm notoriously bad for it myself, and find myself constantly reminded of it. ^^; A few run on sentences with those pesky commas need to be broken into several smaller ones. There was a typo near the end of part 2, the word then I think it was.

Otherwise its coming out rather swimmingly if I do say so myself. :)

(And sorry for the constructive criticism on editing, I've unintentionally picked up the habit from years of writing, which I still am a beginner at. So again, don't take my opinion on it as being good advice.) ^^;
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TheVenomStain Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
that's alright! that's what i get people to read them for!

just don't get frustrated with me when i get defensive i'll calm down after reading your comments over again one or two times ^^;
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zecaa Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I shall start reading these now. :)

Bah, mine are too hard to pick from honestly. I'll try and keep the choices few.

Here they are in no particular order:
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and a bonus crappy/sappy bit of junk I wrote for lulz [link]
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TheVenomStain Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
alright, i'm going to save this message in a special folder i have for important stuff ;) and i'm going to have to spend an hour or two this weekend to just read :XD: i haven't read much good stuff in a LONG time (besides ~SuiginRyuu's stuff. she's FANTASTIC) and i would enjoy some good quality reading time :D
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