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Duncan Gets Spooked - Full Uncut Scene
Dear Readers
The classic episode of Thomas the Tank Engine & Friends titled “Duncan Gets Spooked”, which was written and broadcast as part of the show’s fifth series airing in 1998, is probably best remembered for the scene when Rusty tells Duncan a story about a narrow gauge engine falling to his ‘death’ from the old iron bridge into the ravine below - which audiences actually witnessed with their own eyes through eerie visuals that accompanied Rusty’s narration of this disturbing little tale, bringing it to life in a very spine-chilling way, causing many young viewers watching to be frightened of this unforgettable haunting scene.
What is not very well known, however, is that this story was originally going to be a tad longer with more personality, backstory, character depth and even a name for this mysterious engine, who got none of these things in the final, finished scene.
I present to you the uncut take on this sc
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Thomas - Fast Forward Parody Sketch - Rewrite
Thomas the Tank Engine & Friends
Parody Sketch Rewrite

Based on the original sketch from the Australian Comedy show, “Fast Forward”, and on the upcoming revamped Thomas & Friends series: “Big World! Big Adventures!”
———————
One fine morning, Thomas was just getting ready for work when Percy came steaming into the shed, puffing with excitement.
“Thomas! Thomas!” he said. “There’s a group of really angry women gathered at Knapford Station, and they’re carrying signs which say things like ‘Thomas is a sexist pig!’ and ‘Ban Thomas!’ and ‘Thomas reinforces sex role stereotypes!’”
“Gimme a look,” said Thomas.
———————
The two engines arrived at Knapford station, where they found the group of angry women Percy had mentioned all together on the platform. They were yelling at the top of their
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Star Wars Prequel Trilogy told by the Thomas Theme
(Open up the classic theme tune to Thomas the Tank Engine & Friends and read these lines to the rhythm of the tune in the appropriate places as marked by the timing: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=8gXk8y7_qxY)
(0:02-0:05) A long time ago in a galaxy
(0:06-0:07) Far far away
(0:07-0:09) Are you an angel?
(0:10-0:11) I don’t like sand
(0:11-0:13) It’s course and rough and irritating
(0:14-0:16) And it gets everywhere
(0:16-0:20) Did you ever hear the tragedy of Darth Plagueis the Wise?
(0:21-0:22) I am the Sentate
(0:22-0:24) It’s over, Anakin
(0:24-0:26) I have the high ground
(0:27-0:29) You underestimate my power
(0:29-0:30) You were the chosen
(0:30-0:30) One
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“Did you ever hear the legacy of Reverend Awdry the Railway Man?”
“No.”
“I thought not. It’s not a story an American toy company would tell you. It’s a British legend...”
“Reverend Awdry was a rail enthusiast of the UK so creative and so ingenious he could his passion to invent little stories where locomotives had...life.”
“He had such a knowledge for railways, he could even base the tales he penned up...on true events.”
“He could actually...write talking train stories based on real life?!”
“The Railway Series is a train journey of many stories, most considered to be *realistic*.”
“Well, what happened to him?”
“He became so imaginative. The only thing he was afraid was...running out of ideas - which eventually, of course, he did. But fortunately, he taught his son everything he knew, then his son kept the series
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TAF Season 22+ Theme Rewrite
(*Cue opening notes of the original Thomas theme*)
James!
Percy!
Henry!
And Gordon!
Edward!
Toby!
And Thomas, Number One!
Let’s go, go, go!
To the Island of Sodor!
Let’s go, go, go!
And ride
With Thomas and his friends!
Let’s go, go, go!
And meet really useful engines!
The fun on the railway never ends!
Thomas!
The tank engine!
Thomas the Tank Engine and Friends!
(*repeat of opening notes from the original Thomas theme*)
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The Gummi Ship soared swiftly though the blue atmosphere of the Sea of Other Skies. Sora, Donald and Goofy were making their way from world to world to fight the Heartless. It seemed like an ordinary, quiet flight, when all of a sudden-
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Dear Readers

The classic episode of Thomas the Tank Engine & Friends titled “Duncan Gets Spooked”, which was written and broadcast as part of the show’s fifth series airing in 1998, is probably best remembered for the scene when Rusty tells Duncan a story about a narrow gauge engine falling to his ‘death’ from the old iron bridge into the ravine below - which audiences actually witnessed with their own eyes through eerie visuals that accompanied Rusty’s narration of this disturbing little tale, bringing it to life in a very spine-chilling way, causing many young viewers watching to be frightened of this unforgettable haunting scene.

What is not very well known, however, is that this story was originally going to be a tad longer with more personality, backstory, character depth and even a name for this mysterious engine, who got none of these things in the final, finished scene.

I present to you the uncut take on this scene as it was originally scripted, never been expierenced before by mankind - until now...

Enjoy this memorable scene as it was intended to be narrated...
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Duncan was delighted with Peter Sam’s dilemma.

“Fancy no securin’ your trucks on a hill! They’ll come back to spook you and your special funnel! Whoo-oo-oo!!”

“And who’s to say that you’re not afraid of ghosts?” snapped Rusty.

“Pah! Ghosts?!” Things that go bump in the night?! Rubbish!”

“Well I’ll tell you a story that will make your funnel quiver...”

Rusty paused, impressively.

“...Did you ever hear the tragedy of Darth Plagueis the Wise Engine?”

Duncan gazed at him blankly. “Nay.”

“I thought not... It’s not a story the Fat Controller would tell you... It’s a Sudrian legend...”

And so the little diesel began the story...

“Darth Plagueis was a narrow gauge engine of the Skarloey Railway so careful and so wise, he could tell that the old iron bridge which crosses the swampy ravine was a danger to life...

“He had such a knowledge of the risk, he could tell the other engines the proper way to cross the bridge carefully with their trucks and coaches so that they could make it safely to the other side - without derailing, falling...or dying....”

“He could actually...” Peter Sam was struggling to speak from how much admiration he was in over the engine he was hearing about. “...save engines and people from death?”

“Not all of the other engines were keen to take his advice...” Rusty went on. “Some would take the bridge too roughly and carelessly - only to derail right in the middle, dangling over the side in a perilous position. Only thanks to him arriving at the scene to couple up and pull them to safety were these engines, as well as their respective crews and passengers, saved from falling off the bridge to their demise...”

Duncan scoffed, not the least bit scared so far. He failed to take Rusty’s subtle hint of what could happen to him if he wasn’t careful and crossed the old iron bridge while preforming his famous rock ‘n’ roll.

“Well, what happened to him?” Peter Sam murmured.

“He became a really useful engine...” Rusty half-smiled. “The only thing he was afraid of was...losing his control on the bridge - which eventually, of course, he did...

“Unfortunately, he taught his identical twin brother everything he knew...then his twin killed him by leaving a stone on the rails one misty moonlit night, causing his front wheel to strike it as he was later crossing it, which led him to derail right in the middle of the bridge. With no one else around to stop him falling off, he suddenly lost control and plunged over the side into the swamps below...

“He was never found again... But his brother made out to the controller of the railway he was traumatised by Plaguis’ death - which he’d secretly caused. Fooled by this little charade, the controller prompted to give him exactly what he wanted - which was to wear Plaugeis’ number...”

Duncan stared silently while Peter Sam gaped at Rusty with wide eyes full of horror over what the little diesel had just told them happened to the engine in the story. None of them grasped it was possible Plagueis’ murderous twin brother was still out there, living with them on the railway and proudly wearing his fallen identical sibling’s number - which happened to be #1...

As Rusty looked away from them both, he couldn’t help but smirk in amusement to himself.

“Ironic...he could save others from death by that bridge...but not himself!!!”

“I-Is that h-how the s-s-story e-ends?” Peter Sam asked in a shocked, disturbed stutter, struggling to take in what he’d just listened to.

“Not exactly...” came the blunt reply. “For many a workman will tell you that when the moon is full, they have seen Darth Plagueis trying to get home - but he never reaches the other side! He always vanishes away on the bridge as mysteriously as he appears there - just like a Force Ghost!!!”

With his grim tale of tragedy and horror now over, the little diesel gazed at the yellow engine he had intended to use it to scare - having certainly succeeded to terrify the steam out of the poor younger green one who’d been forced to hear every terrible bit of it.

Completely failing to notice how much he’d frightened poor Peter Sam, Rusty grinned at his Scottish rival.

“So what do you think of that, Duncan?!”

“Pah! Nonsense!” replied Duncan.

And he puffed away.
Duncan Gets Spooked - Full Uncut Scene

Before I say anything else, I would like to thank TheRealXboxNerd of YouTube who inspired me to write this. It came from an awesome YTP he made of this particular Thomas episode which - around the time the most infamous scene starts - included a famous line/meme from Star Wars as a gag, which I totally didn’t see coming and thought fitted perfectly and found hilarious. 

So much so, it inspired me to do this rewrite of that well-known haunting scene - based around the dialogue which that Star Wars meme causes in its respective scene. So, TheRealXboxNerd, if you’re reading this, thanks! I owe you one! I had so much fun writing this, yet I never would’ve thought of if it weren’t for you! 😉

It’s only fair I provide the link for that awesome YTP of his here to give it more exposure! I’m sure it’ll give you guys plenty of laughs! It certainly worked for me: m.youtube.com/watch?v=Cglb8ZKO…

So yeah, by retelling this infamous scene with this iconic meme, I gave more depth, backstory an an actual name to the unknown engine, giving a more believable explaination for his for why he fell off the bridge, made his death darker and more tragic...even giving a bit of explanation for why he looked exactly likes a certain engine... Maybe the producers used that certain charcter’s model of all the ones they had to portray him... Just like how Anakin didn’t grasp Plagueis’ murderous apprentice was the one telling him the story, nobody here seems to grasp the one who caused that locomotive to die - is a certain engine identical to him who serves as Engine #1 on the Skarloey Railway... 😉

Thomas & Friends (c) Mattel

Star Wars (c) Lucasfilm, Disney

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This whole week of me doing creative writing with memes has reached its peak today - which I have spent writing and uploading a total of FOUR meme-based fics for my account on fanfiction.net!!! Just like many of the others I’ve written this week, they just came to me on the spot, resulting in me writing them straight away and then uploading them - only for more ideas to hit me and drive me to write them out. 

Gee, I’m throwing away so much free time...


...BUT I’M HAPPY!!!!!! YAYYYYY!!!!!!!!11111111!!!!!!!!!1111111 :la::la::la: 


(I’ll hand out a bar of gold anyone who knows what the above meme I just quoted is from: one which is so gold that it’s invisible! ;) XD )
Thomas the Tank Engine & Friends
Parody Sketch Rewrite


Based on the original sketch from the Australian Comedy show, “Fast Forward”, and on the upcoming revamped Thomas & Friends series: “Big World! Big Adventures!”

———————
One fine morning, Thomas was just getting ready for work when Percy came steaming into the shed, puffing with excitement.

“Thomas! Thomas!” he said. “There’s a group of really angry women gathered at Knapford Station, and they’re carrying signs which say things like ‘Thomas is a sexist pig!’ and ‘Ban Thomas!’ and ‘Thomas reinforces sex role stereotypes!’”

“Gimme a look,” said Thomas.
———————
The two engines arrived at Knapford station, where they found the group of angry women Percy had mentioned all together on the platform. They were yelling at the top of their lungs what was written on the signs they carried, which were full of false accusations of sexism against the little blue locomotive. They would not stop angrily calling for the Fat Controller to strip his number one engine of his job, as well as to arrange to have him sent off to the scrapyard to be melted down once and for all.

Thomas frowned, not the least bit impressed by what he was seeing and hearing. “What a bunch of ugly lezzos!”

“Now that’s not quite fair, Thomas,” said Percy. “They do have a point; for instance, why is it that there are more male engines than females on this railway?”

“Because I like having boys around me!” Thomas grinned. “Now come back to the shed and I’ll show you my funnel!”
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Later that week, however, the Fat Controller called a meeting at Tidmouth Sheds with all the engines.

“Is everyone here?!” he called out.

“Henry isn’t here!” cried James.

“Well where is he?!” bellowed the Fat Controller angrily.

“He’s shunting Edward in the Steamworks!” cried Gordon.

“Now settle down,” said the Fat Controller. “I’ve something very important to tell you...”

“I have here an order from the political correctness brigade, which tells us that from now on ... we’ve got to have more female engines! Two new ones called Nia and Rebecca will be joining the railway soon! Not only that, but the moment they’ll arrive here, before any one of you will get a chance to even get to know them, the pair of them shall instantly be granted residence with you all here at the sheds ... permanently taking the places of Henry and Edward!”

The engines didn’t like this idea at all. They booed and hissed the Fat Controller.

“Boo!”

“Hiss!”

“Boo!”

“Boo!”

“Hiss!”
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A few months later, the new female engines arrived, and everyone was surprised at how well they fitted in.

In fact, Edward, Henry and Toby said they preferred sharing the line with female engines - because they had “Nicer couplings!”

Thomas could go either way...
Thomas - Fast Forward Parody Sketch - Rewrite
Decided to do a rewrite of this particular sketch from Fast Forward that makes fun of Thomas the Tank Engine (m.youtube.com/watch?v=35pzZ9bg…) because shockingly, despite being made in 1991...it predicts what’s going to happen in the new upcoming revamp of the series, Big World! Big Adventures! :O

Decided to rework it so that is specifically features what’s confirmed to happen in the series, as well as instead, of making up or getting wrong characters’ names wrong, as the original sketch did, use the characters’ actual names - including some certain ones who’s roles in the show are controversially being affected by these upcoming new females arrivals - but have in fact been confirmed to still be very much part of the show and are not going away. Maybe they will enjoy the company of these new arrivals. ;) The last line is definitely how Thomas will feel! XD

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I'm here to spend time with my friends, share some stories I feel like throwing here, roleplay and appreciate art. My favourite franchises are Kingdom Hearts, Final Fantasy, Teen Titans, Mario, Sonic the Hedgehog, Crash Bandicoot, Disney, Star Wars, Harry Potter, Beavis & Butt-Head, South Park, Thomas & Friends and TUGS.

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