Bard Gesture 1 B

This is after tweaking everything to be (basically) on-model. I'm only screencaping the WIP so I can get my friend's feedback asap--because I'm too close to this! (It's the first gesture I've done with this face, and I don't typically do a lot of portrait sketches of my characters, so I'm feeling incredibly precious about everything.) Absolutely I'm not going to do this for every gesture, the first one is just...well, it's like the first pancake, you know? You know it's not going to be your best attempt but you still want it to be palatable. To serve it on a plate with a straight face. 

 That said, I do love his expression. Reminds me of Shakespeare in 'Something Rotten'. www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZJ_PhU…