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Two sides of the same spell
Two sides of the same spell
By: Yurix"What I going to do with you, boy?"That was the question that Rauz always asked every time Gil made a mistake. And these days, it was once every hour, which was making the Magus fume constantly.Rauz was known as one of the strictest mentors when it comes to teaching magic, and having a list of discovered spells as long as his beard which he was neatly kept and tied near in a knot near his belt made him a figure in lore.Gil, however, was probably one of the most well-meaning apprentices he met, yet lately, that title was overshadowed by the clumsiest. It wasn't that Gil was lesser-minded he was bri...
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away.
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like the wind, the trees and animals just a blur to them. As they jumped a ravine, a rock
gave way under Jad’en’s feet. He yelled as he fell. He thought this was the time he would die.
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The Prince of Arkea
The Prince was called to hear a grievance from a group of people resting on the head of the giant Gebronk. He was familiar with these people, The Miniske, usually just called Mini but don’t call them that in front of them. They hate it. They are a fairly large community of mouse traders, merchants as well as medieval style knights and archers. Yes. Mice. The Prince has been all over the world and seen all manner of strange creatures. Talking Mice was hardly the most outrageous thing he’d seen. The Prince wore a blue hood and cape that reached down to his legs and he wore a blue and white shirt that had the picture of a phoenix rising from ...
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An entry for the Light Source contest. They didn't specify a word limit (thing which they may regret in hindsight, seeing the uber-length of this story (10 pages), but... eh... oops?
If it helps, copy-paste it to Word or Open Office, they might be easier on the eyes.
I've been reshaping this in my head since August 20. It started out as a flash story with only Claudius and Michael (then named Master and Tom) discussing light. Then Keeta stumbled along (originally named Kita, meaning 'North' in Japanese), then there was lightning harvesting and Julia. The idea of Claudius having a son only came to me today, inspired by Preisner's amazingly haunting soundtrack, which soundtrack smashed right into my story and changed some of the background entirely.
What else to say?... The story is mainly viewed from a Michael-like POV, which means that the alternately capitalized Master/master is meant to be that way. I also love Keeta, but Mike doesn't, hence all the evil little comments (this might be obvious).
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If it helps, copy-paste it to Word or Open Office, they might be easier on the eyes.
I've been reshaping this in my head since August 20. It started out as a flash story with only Claudius and Michael (then named Master and Tom) discussing light. Then Keeta stumbled along (originally named Kita, meaning 'North' in Japanese), then there was lightning harvesting and Julia. The idea of Claudius having a son only came to me today, inspired by Preisner's amazingly haunting soundtrack, which soundtrack smashed right into my story and changed some of the background entirely.
What else to say?... The story is mainly viewed from a Michael-like POV, which means that the alternately capitalized Master/master is meant to be that way. I also love Keeta, but Mike doesn't, hence all the evil little comments (this might be obvious).
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Hmmm, I might reference your elemental theory, if it doesn't bug you. What are the attributes of lightning, to match with Sun and Moon?