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Friends of the Dead 1-20

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By thenumber42   |   
Published: January 15, 2010
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Dracula should wipe his face. Also those angry villagers should be running downstairs, not up...

Bit unhappy with how the layout turned out. Also I may knock the word size down a little. Those green boxes were swamping over the smaller panels on this page. Y'all think it'd still be legible if I shrunk the text down a tad?
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Rocky-OProfessional Digital Artist
downstairs? I'd think they'd run upstairs... isn't the master bedroom at the top? *w*;
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thenumber42Student Traditional Artist
yes but his coffin is at the basement ^^
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Rocky-OProfessional Digital Artist
OHHHH :rofl:
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I found it slightly confusing to figure out the correct reading order. Of course, I'm the manga freak here, so it could just be me. XD;;
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thenumber42Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, composition wasn't what I'd quite hoped for, and the huge text made it difficult to put where it would be read in the right order. Gonna knock down the size next time.
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Alright. I look forward to the next page. ^^
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I think knocking the text size down wouldn't be a problem and it would lower the greenness down per page.
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AlexGhostHobbyist Digital Artist
I think The text size is fine as it is. If you shrink it the text will become a bit harder to read. Yeah, Dracy should clean himself up a bit.
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Kuroyo19Hobbyist General Artist
This is awesome~
Poor Dracula. xD
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