For those who are either blind, retarded, or just not paying attention, I posted a new piece of literature, but it's only a single chapter. Yes, I'm doing an ongoing tale, once again. This time, the hero is not an adorable giant naked snake girl or some shit, but instead, a sword-wielding loli in armor. I would greatly appreciate any feedback on the first chapter, as if anything doesn't get noticed before I go further, that's it.
So if you like action, adventure, and lolis, I recommend checking this out. It'll help me greatly.