To be honest, too vulgar for me with Asian culture. But you're very confident. Maybe a little direction style is you can also experiment with the layout of the arms and hands. Facial expression also determines the type of photos that you want to be.
You have nice body, very classic shape. This pose is good for stock - strong and natural. Try to use natural daylight or two special light sources (speedlights, for example) and make you shots on black, white or light colour background (wall without decor, long curtain or smth similar).
You have a strong pose and a lot of confidence! As many of the other comments say, try to improve lighting and the background. Also, you might want to fix those red eyes. Other than that, good job.
personally i would of had you sitting down on the ground with your legs up like crouched wise your arms wrapped around them and staring at the camera also you need better lighting makes the photo to dark.
I'm probably going to be the only one that says this but what's the anklet?? That's probably rude to ask but I honestly dunno. The photo does hold intrigue the pose is a strong one. Lighting and angle could be a little better though