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MEPArtz's avatar
This is just wonderful. :clap: I love it...
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Thank you, I'm glad you like it, sorry for taking so long to reply 
EveryNextDream's avatar
This is so incredibly beautiful. The ending is perfect :heart:
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Thank you sorry it took me so long to reply haven't been on DA for so long! 
Chezzy-Am's avatar
This was a really good tale in my opinion. I liked the twist in particular at the end. :thumbsup: The overall ambiance of this story was dark, dreary, but concrete and even in its narration, compact. The ending was sick, and a tad bit deranged, but overall, acceptable - I find that her responses are justified based on her experience, which was also well defined. It's interesting that your stories that tend to be brief, are well thought out and well written and deliver always. And yet, it's your long stories that often tend to mislead me into underestimating these stories (even though both are on parity. This story is just as well written as "Chaos, As One" or "And Now as the Cities Weep" - and their respective sequels).

All in all, a good read. :thumbsup: again.

Some recos here are in order: OfOneSoul DiseasedDoll .
thelitbeast's avatar
Thank you, as always.
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Anytime, mate.
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